Unki Berukhi

m.a.d.i.h.a · March 14, 2007, 6:04pm

Hi i am new member here i have reading all your sharings from a long time now i am here to share some of mine Intikhab.

Here is the 1st one

un ki beruKhi meiN bhi, iltefaat shaamil hai
aaj kal meri haalat, deikhney ke qaabil hai

qatl ho to meira sa, maut ho to meiri si
mere sogvaaroN meiN, aaj meira qaatil hai

***muztarib haiN maujeiN kyuN, uTh rahe haiN tufaaN kyuN
kyaa kisi safeeney ko, aarzu – e - sahil hai ***

***sirf raahzan hii se, kyuuN Ameer shikwa ho
manziloN ki raahoN meiN raahbar bhi shaamil hai ***

being_lonely · March 14, 2007, 6:10pm

Re: Unki Berukhi

Very nice sharing Madiha :k: thx for joining us hope you will share ur all intikhab wid us !!! Thanks !!

chacha_Ghalib · March 14, 2007, 6:13pm

Re: Unki Berukhi

welcome to poetry... hope u write ur own poetry as well. If u do then plz share it with us in the shora-e-gupshup forum.

Shab-e-Hijar · March 14, 2007, 6:47pm

Re: Unki Berukhi

Nice :k:
and welcome on board

_MuNiYa · March 14, 2007, 6:48pm

Re: Unki Berukhi

nice!

aabla_pa · March 14, 2007, 8:54pm

Re: Unki Berukhi

Good 1. Keep it UP :)

rashidali · March 14, 2007, 10:35pm

Re: Unki Berukhi

nice

Gondal_007 · March 15, 2007, 4:17am

Re: Unki Berukhi

Bohat khoob

Asma_Farhan · March 15, 2007, 7:29am

Re: Unki Berukhi

Very nice n Welcome!

tahreem_saeed · March 15, 2007, 11:16am

Re: Unki Berukhi

welcome madiha nice to see u here bohat hi achi sharing hai

pk786 · March 15, 2007, 11:23am

Re: Unki Berukhi

nice one keep it up and welcome to GS

aminas · March 15, 2007, 11:43am

Re: Unki Berukhi

very nice and welcome to Gupland !

moonmine · March 15, 2007, 4:25pm

Re: Unki Berukhi

good one! & Welcome...

m.a.d.i.h.a · March 15, 2007, 5:04pm

Re: Unki Berukhi

thnx everyone