un ko samaiy'tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

[Koyal]

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bigra mera naseeb to sub kuch sanwar gaya
kantooN pe meiN gira aur zamana guzar gaya

toofaN se thaak k meiN nay patwar choor di
jub doob meiN chuka to samandar thahar gaya

tukray teray wajood k phay’lay they meray paas
un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

manzil ko dhoondta tha musafir ye kia howa
aik rahguzar pe us ka safar bhi bhichar gaya

dhalnay lagi hai raat chalay jaa’oo doosto
mujh ko be dhoondna hai mera ghar kidhar gaya*

[Capricorn]

Re: un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

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dhalnay lagi hai raat chalay jaa’oo doosto
mujh ko be dhoondna hai mera ghar kidhar gaya*

Fikar naheen karo, mein hoon na…aapko ghar tak chor ke aaoonga
PS:- Its a very sad ghazal

[Azad]

humm

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

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bigra mera naseeb to sub kuch sanwar gaya
kantooN pe meiN gira aur zamana guzar gaya

toofaN se thaak k meiN nay patwar choor di
jub doob meiN chuka to samandar thahar gaya

tukray teray wajood k phay’lay they meray paas
un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

manzil ko dhoondta tha musafir ye kia howa
aik rahguzar pe us ka safar bhi bhichar gaya

dhalnay lagi hai raat chalay jaa’oo doosto
mujh ko be dhoondna hai mera ghar kidhar gaya*

wowoow two thumbzzzz up:flower1:

[insan]

Re: un ko samaiy'tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Koyal: *

bigra mera naseeb to sub kuch sanwar gaya
kantooN pe meiN gira aur zamana guzar gaya

toofaN se thaak k meiN nay patwar choor di
jub doob meiN chuka to samandar thahar gaya

tukray teray wajood k phay'lay they meray paas
un ko samaiy'tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

manzil ko dhoondta tha musafir ye kia howa
aik rahguzar pe us ka safar bhi bhichar gaya

dhalnay lagi hai raat chalay jaa'oo doosto
mujh ko be dhoondna hai mera ghar kidhar gaya*
[/QUOTE]

maza agya very nice written keep writing koyal baji

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

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tukray teray wajood k phay’lay they meray paas
un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

Nice 1 :k:

[cuteepie]

:k:

[MANAN]

:)

[WiseGuy]

Re: un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

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bigra mera naseeb to sub kuch sanwar gaya
kantooN pe meiN gira aur zamana guzar gaya

toofaN se thaak k meiN nay patwar choor di
jub doob meiN chuka to samandar thahar gaya

tukray teray wajood k phay’lay they meray paas
un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

manzil ko dhoondta tha musafir ye kia howa
aik rahguzar pe us ka safar bhi bhichar gaya

dhalnay lagi hai raat chalay jaa’oo doosto
mujh ko be dhoondna hai mera ghar kidhar gaya*

Very Nice! :k:

[Koyal]

Re: Re: un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Fikar naheen karo, mein hoon na…aapko ghar tak chor ke aaoonga
PS:- Its a very sad ghazal

ap ko dosroon ko lift dainay se fursat milay tu ap kisi aur ko be ghar taak choro na…it’s not that sad capri wesay he kahiey ap ka ronay ka mun ho raha..

[Koyal]

thanksss ..hmmm..cute..manan...insan and gazal..:)

[Koyal]

Re: Re: un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Very Nice! :k:

V thanks..

[Koyal]

Re: Re: un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

*Originally posted by Shab-e-Hijar: *

Nice 1 :k:

thanks..

[Daagh]

Re: un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

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bigra mera naseeb to sub kuch sanwar gaya
kantooN pe meiN gira aur zamana guzar gaya

manzil ko dhoondta tha musafir ye kia howa
aik rahguzar pe us ka safar bhi bhichar gaya

bahot khoob Koyal jee

[Koyal]

Re: Re: un ko samaiy’tnay meiN maiN khud he bikhar gaya

*Originally posted by Daagh: *

bahot khoob Koyal jee

thanks sallu g..