~* Un-kahi baton ka Qarb *~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Kuch un-kahi batain.. Zaban ki larzish main muqaffil.. Taraptay dil ki khoahish.. Main apnay dil kay band nihaan khanon main.. Qaid ker aae hon, Un per Khaobeeda aankhon kay chand khoab..kharay ker kay.. Sochti hon.. Kab tak bachon ki apnay aap say.. Kabhi agar yeh khamoshi bol uthi.. Tu yeh khoab..yeh band dareechay..aur mairi aankhain Kuch bhi tu na rook sakain gi aur.. aur phir.. Tumhain aur mujhay jhulsa dain gi ...

**By..
Ambreen Qureshi
(Philanthrope)
**

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:slight_smile:

beautifully put.

Zabardast :slight_smile:

:bravo:

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Very Nice… :flower1:

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beautiful....:-/

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Bahut hi khoobsurat nazm hai … :k::k::k:

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Its beautiful and well-worded poem Ambreen :k:

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:mash:

Bohat khoob!

ALLAH Aap ko iss say acha liknay ki taufeeq day. :slight_smile:

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Kabhi agar yeh khamoshi bol uthi..

:slight_smile: poori naz’m sirf iss ik Ddar kay hisaar maiN muqqiayadd hai :k:

very nice :flower1:

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Bohat bohat shukriya pasand kernay ka :slight_smile: InshaAllah likhnay ki koshish kerti rahon gi :flower1:

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MASHALLAH … finally some poetry soo expressive that even a pathan can understand.. :flower1:
KIA baat hai ji app ki.. v v artistic and romantic… REAL GOOD STUFF.. :k:

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:k:

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humm

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excellent effort, you sure are improving with every poetical post :k: :flower1:

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Wounderful

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:k: Ambo baji…

wesay Is Khamoshi mein bari KICK hai…

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game uThaa diyaa aap kay iss comment nay:D

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koi or kaam nahi tha app ko :smack:

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nice, nice.........:)

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kyon tum ko kya hai…

itna acha to kam kiy hai…

tum apna fittaymoon band hi rakh karo… :smiley:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Mr.GupShup: *

kyon tum ko kya hai...

itna acha to kam kiy hai...

tum apna fittaymoon band hi rakh karo... :D
[/QUOTE]

acha uncle:D