UN K HONAY SAY

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Main Jo Mehka To Meri Shaakh Jala Di Us Nay
Sabz Mausam Main Mujhy Zard Hawa Di Us Nay..

Pehly Ik Lamhy Ki Zanjeer Say Baandha Mujhko
Or Phir Wakt Ki Raftaar Barha Di Us Nay..

Jaanta Tha K Mujhy Maut Sakoon Bakhshy Gi
Wo Sitamgarr Tha So Jeeny Ki Dua Di Us Nay…

Us K Hony Say Thi Saansain Meri Dugnii Mohsin!
Wo Jo Bichra To Meri Umr Ghata Di Us Nay…

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Pehly Ik Lamhy Ki Zanjeer Say Baandha Mujhko
Or Phir Wakt Ki Raftaar Barha Di Us Nay..
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^^ Very CLearver. ;)

Nice Poem Indeed

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What’a beautiful ghazal :k: Thanx bheegiyaad for sharing it with us :slight_smile:

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[quote=“bheegiyaad”]

Pehly Ik Lamhy Ki Zanjeer Say Baandha Mujhko
Or Phir Wakt Ki Raftaar Barha Di Us Nay..

QUOTE]

very nice :k:

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Pehly Ik Lamhy Ki Zanjeer Say Baandha Mujhko
Or Phir Wakt Ki Raftaar Barha Di Us Nay..

what is the poet trying to say here?

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Here is the first draft of translation. Corrections/suggestions welcome.

When I was to bloom, he cut me off the branch
In the spring he made me suffer in cold winds

First he kept me captive momentarily
Later the moments stretched into long times

I knew that death will grant me peace
As he was a tyrant, I begged him for life

His presence used to quicken my breathing
But when he left my life was shortened.

Note: After comments/corrections, if any, the translation will be added to the 'World Poetry in Translation - Mostly Urdu'

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Pehly Ik Lamhy Ki Zanjeer Say Baandha Mujhko
Or Phir Wakt Ki Raftaar Barha Di Us Nay..

Us K Hony Say Thi Saansain Meri Dugnii Mohsin!
Wo Jo Bichra To Meri Umr Ghata Di Us Nay...
bohat khoob!!!!!<!-- / message -->

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thanx everyone :)

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nice.

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Zabardast Ghazal , thanks for sharing sis:-)