un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN ik shaam kahiN aabad tu ho

***un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN
ik shaam kahiN aabaad tu ho

us jheel kinaaray pal do pal
ik khwaab ka neela phool khilay
wo phool baha daiN lehroN maiN
ik roz kabhi hum shaam dhalay
uss phool k behtay rangoN maiN
jis waqt laraztaa chaand chalay

uss waqt kahiN uN ankhoN maiN
uss basray pal ki yaad tu ho
uN jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN
ik shaam kahiN aabaad tu ho

phir chahay umar samandar ki
har moj preshaa’N ho jaa’ey
phir chahay aankh dareechay say
her khwaab guray’zaa ho jaa’ey
phir chahay phool k chehray ka
her dard numa’yaan ho jaae’y

uss jheel kinaray pal do pal
wo roop-nagar iijaad tu ho
din raat k iss aaiee’nay say
wo aks kabhi aazaad tu ho
un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN
ik shaam kahiN aabaad tu ho


Re: un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN ik shaam kahiN aabad tu ho

Lovely ... valentine par kartay to ziyda achi lagti :p

Re: un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN ik shaam kahiN aabad tu ho

valentine pe tu koi love shove karey ghi na :D

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Its so very beautiful Koko....creates a strong image in the mind. Love ur threads...always

Re: un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN ik shaam kahiN aabad tu ho

Buhat khoob :k:

Re: un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN ik shaam kahiN aabad tu ho

beautiful..

Re: un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN ik shaam kahiN aabad tu ho

***un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN
ik shaam kahiN aabaad tu ho

:hayaa:


Re: un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN ik shaam kahiN aabad tu ho

Jii Jii Unn Jheel See Gehrii Aankhoon Main…Ik Shaam Khaeen Abad Tu Hoo:halo:

PS Nice choice:)

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all time fav :k:
thanx for sharing ku ku

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Fantastic Nazm!

Re: un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN ik shaam kahiN aabad tu ho

jheel ho gee tu kushtee bhee honi chahiyaa; shaam ho gee tu undhairaa phir koi roshni ka bistobund; so kafi bakhiaray hain soach lain!

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Very Nice Koyal..:k:

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thanks J wali :blush:

Re: un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN ik shaam kahiN aabad tu ho

thanks Aryaan is dafa sab se pahlay ap ka thanks kia :slight_smile:

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i know i always have gud taste :blush:

Re: un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN ik shaam kahiN aabad tu ho

kon kaha abad hoing:cb:

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Bohat khoob Koyal.. :lajawab:

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:mash:

Re: un jheel si gehri ankhoN maiN ik shaam kahiN aabad tu ho

Hoti haina, kabhi jheelon ke seene mai khushki palti hai, kabhi khushki par paniyon ke jazeeray tairte hain. Jahan tak rah isham aor andheron ki baat, jab andhera andar se uth’ta hai, to koi suraj, koi taray us andhere ko kam nahi kar sakte. ZIndgi to nam hi bakhairho ka hai muncho.

Coming back to the poem. Oh so lyrical :wub: Amjad Islam Amjad has got the privilege of unchartered no man’s land when it comes to romantic poetry. He simply rocks.

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nice