un beete dinoon ki baat ha yeh ...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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kiya haal kaheen us mausam ka-----jab jins-i-jawani sasti thi
jis phool ko chomo khilta tha-----jis shay ko dekho hansti thi
jeena sacha jeena tha -----hasti aain-i-hasti thi
afsana,jadoo,afsoon tha -----ghaflat,neendein,masti thi

           un beetoon deenoon ki baat hai yeh
                  jab dil ki basti,basti thi

ghaflat,neendein,masti,thi----------aankhein kiya, peemanay thay
har roz jawani bikti thi ----------har sham-o-sehar be-aanay thay
har khar mein eik but-khana tha-----har phool mein so mekhanay thay
kali,kali zulfein theen ------------gooray,gooray shaney thay

                 un beetoon deenoon ki baat hai yeh
                  jab dil ki basti,basti thi

goray,goray shanay thay-------hulki phulki baheein theen
har gaam pay khalwat-ghanay thay------har moor pay ishrat-ghaeiin theen
tughiaan-i-khusi kay aansoo thay-------taqmeel-i-tarab ki aahaein theen
ashway,cheeleen,ghamzay thay-----------paltein khusian,chaheein theen

                  un beetoon deenoon ki baat hai yeh
                  jab dil ki basti,basti thi
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Very nice

Very nice and what you did was a brave thing....

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Re: Very nice

oh ..
:smack:
i did not do anything
its nazam of josh maleh aabadi
he is basically this kind of person
in another nazam of his “yadoon ki baraat” he has talked about his fourteen beloved ones … 14 ishq … thats too much :disgust:

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Its a nice poem guybrush and thanks so much for sharing :k:
14 ishqs is not too much…mere khyal mein Josh sahib ne sab sach bhee naheen kaha hoga..I mean he might have actually loved more than 14 but u know kuch sharam o haya ka bhee koi taqaza hota hai na :smiley:

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Niceeeeeeeeee .. :k:

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:k: bohat achi hai :slight_smile:

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ab garray murday to na ukharo na

:eek: :stuck_out_tongue: :smiley: :hehe:

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Thanks for appreciating capricon,vivacious and heart hacker :flower1:

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*guybrush *
Zabardust :)

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bohut khoob:k:

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thanks arifnawaz n gkk :)