Umr bhar ki naqdi main

muqawwee123 · June 30, 2012, 10:49pm

BaRa maan tha
Iss baat per Ke
Muhabbaton se bhara huwa hai daaman
**
Ik gumaan tha ke**
Umr ka kaasa, khuloos ke
Khanakte sikkon se hai bhara huwa

Iss umr bhar ki poonji ko
Jab kharch karne nikla to jana
Umr bhar ki naqdi main
Koi sikka khara nahin hai
Naram lehje khokhle saare
Koi bhi dil wafa se bhara nahin hai

LP · June 30, 2012, 10:52pm

Re: Umr bhar ki naqdi main

fajr ke time itni sad poetry :(

muqawwee123 · June 30, 2012, 10:53pm

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kabhi to insaan ko sach bhi bolna chahiye :(

enter10 · June 30, 2012, 10:53pm

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Bohat AALA…

muqawwee123 · June 30, 2012, 10:54pm

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paisa wasool

LP · June 30, 2012, 10:55pm

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fantasy world is better

LP · June 30, 2012, 10:55pm

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zoo ke entry thee kya ?

muqawwee123 · June 30, 2012, 10:57pm

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Itni mehnat se maine likhi, nok palak sahi ki.. to enter10 ne pasand kia to paisa wasool

LP · June 30, 2012, 10:59pm

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ye intekhaab mai kyon hai phir
sho’ara e gupshup mai kyon nahi

mujhey bhi pasand aaye naaa…juts tht its too sad and im in a happy shappy mood

muqawwee123 · June 30, 2012, 11:03pm

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bus 5 saal baad koi puri nazm likhi to jaldi main yahan post ho gai...

LP · June 30, 2012, 11:07pm

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good :D

aur woh purani diary bhi mill gaye...ab aur posts kijiyga :D

enter10 · June 30, 2012, 11:07pm

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Bro apna Takhal`lus add Q nhi krty......?

LP · June 30, 2012, 11:08pm

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takhallus zaroori tou nai

muqawwee123 · June 30, 2012, 11:09pm

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Kal karoonga ek nazm jo mujhe ba zaat khud pasand hai

muqawwee123 · June 30, 2012, 11:10pm

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yaar I'm not a professional poet.. kabhi sanjeedgi se kuch likha hi nahin.. ye wali nazm bhi 5 saal baad likhi hai

LP · June 30, 2012, 11:11pm

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we are waiting :D

enter10 · June 30, 2012, 11:14pm

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phr bhi hona chahiya....
Jab decide ho ja`ay to PM krna na bhoolna **CM **bro

LP · June 30, 2012, 11:15pm

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unko kyon pm kerna hai

muqawwee123 · June 30, 2012, 11:17pm

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No chances for takhallus, because my favorite poet Parveen Shakir did not use takhallus.

enter10 · June 30, 2012, 11:17pm

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waisy Taraqqi(writing) k liya "US" haath ka hona bhi Zarori hy......:)