Umm do tell me how is it ? A new Poem By ME

system · July 4, 2003, 7:08am

Laboun Paye Naam…

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Aaaj Phir Aaa Raha Haye Laboun Paye Kisi Ka Naam
Jaisaye Chah Rahi Haye Uffak Per Surkhi Sare-Shaam

Dil Saye Mairaye Jaata Nahi Zikkar Uska
Ussaye Kaisaye Bhulaaoun? Uska Husan Haye Be-Naam

Chehra Jab Bhi Banta Haye Usska Khiyaaloun Mein
Rehta Nahi Koye Hosh Jaisyae Chalka Liya Ho Jaaam

Apnaye Dil Ko Tou Sirf Ussi Ki Haye Piyaas
Bin Ussakaye,Isska Her Din Hota Haye Sayaaam

Paanaye Ki Ussko Jusataju Meri Haye Shadeed
Keryoun Ga Mein Usskaye Liaye Ratoun Ko Qayaam

Rahaye Ga Mujhaye Usska Abad Taq Intizaar
Agerchaye Ab Taq Aya Nahi Uska Koye Piyaam

Kaash Kaye Meri Chahat Taqmeel Ko Phounchaye
Kaye Chanaye Waloun Kaye Hotaye Hein Booraye Anjaam

Ager Kabhi Ki ussnaye Bay-Wafaaaee Mujh Saye
Ussi Din Keroun Ga Mein Zindagee Ko Salaam

Wo Tou Souch Kaye Bhulaataye Haye Mujhaye ‘Salman’
Ussaye Bhula Bhula Ker Souchna Maira Haye Kaam

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Black_Mamba · July 4, 2003, 10:13am

Re: Umm do tell me how is it ? A new Poem By ME

:k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 4, 2003, 1:20pm

keep it up & Thanks for sharing.

ASA · July 4, 2003, 2:28pm

bouhat he khoob… :k:

system · July 4, 2003, 2:51pm

:k:

system · July 4, 2003, 3:50pm

Thank You All of you for reading it .. i appreciate it
-Salman

_Nazish · July 4, 2003, 3:52pm

Nice try

keep it up :k:

SuraJ · July 5, 2003, 11:12am

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 5, 2003, 6:00pm

Bohat achay :k:

share more with us agr ap ne likhee hain

system · July 7, 2003, 8:20pm

i have more and inshAllah i will write some more too.. when ever i have the time thanx for taking some interest
-Sal

ghazal_kisi_ke · July 7, 2003, 9:26pm

keep it up:k::k:
its good:)

Swera · July 8, 2003, 3:09am

Bohat khoob,

system · July 9, 2003, 12:59am

thanx

DeSiMuNdA · July 9, 2003, 3:28am

nice effort :k: