*UmEeD*

[Shazia_Arif]

Re: UmEeD

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

hmmm Alfaaz ka Chunao bohat khoob kiya hai lekin kuch na kuch kami hai.. na nazm ka ta’sur hai na Ghazal ka :-p new cheez ejaad kar rahi haiN ?
koshish jaari rakhiye
khush rahiye

g bilkul theek kaha Gul..mujhe b ye koi or he cheez lag rhi hai or jis kami ki taraf ap ka ishara hai,main b wazan main bohat kami mehsoos ker rhi hun..thanx for the good wishes:)