~ Umeed-e-wafa ~

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · December 13, 2002, 7:05pm

Judaii denay walay tumsay Umeed-e-wafa kaesii
Ta’aluQ tuuT jaey jab
muhabbat Rooth jaey jab
tou phir Rasm-e- Dua kaesi
milan kii iltejaa kaesi
bhanwar meiN dolti kashti pe sahil ki tamana kya
ukhartay Saans hoN tou zindagi ki Aarzuu bhi kya
jo manzil khoh chuki ho uss ki phir say justuju bhi kyuN
magar dil nay tumhaiN kis waastay say yaad rakha hay
tumhain kyuN Shaairi meiN aaj tak Aabad rakha hay
abhi tak maiN nay kyuN khud ko buhat barbaad rakha hay
hawa key dosh par kyuN naghma-e- faryaad rakha hay
judaai denay walay Aashnaai ki Qasam tum ko
tumhari be-wafai, kaj adaai ki Qasam tum ko
mujhey itnaa bataa denaa
wafa ki chaahton ki mash’alaiN kaesay bhujaatay haiN
NishaaN kaesay mitaatay haiN
bhulana ho jinhaiN unko bhala kaesay bhulatay haiN…!!

chand_chehra · December 13, 2002, 9:16pm

Nice :k:

Tera_Deewana · December 13, 2002, 9:21pm

good

nikii · December 13, 2002, 9:46pm

veryyy nice :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · December 13, 2002, 10:35pm

bhut khoob:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 14, 2002, 12:28am

wahh!!!
:k:

arifnawaz1 · December 14, 2002, 3:10pm

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Wonderful :k::k::k:
Thanks for sharing

aadhoorighazal · December 14, 2002, 11:28pm

gul-e-tasbee,
main nae yeh jana kae goya yeh bhi maerae dil main hai

this one is superb, kis ki nazam hai yeh??? jaesae koi dard-e-mushtariq ho maera aur shair ka.......do let me know the name ,OK!!!

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · December 15, 2002, 11:51am

Thanks alot arifnawaz, ghazal kisi ke, Jaan Lewaa, nikii, Tera Deewana &
Chanda

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · December 15, 2002, 12:12pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *
gul-e-tasbee,
main nae yeh jana kae goya yeh bhi maerae dil main hai

this one is superb, kis ki nazam hai yeh??? jaesae koi dard-e-mushtariq
ho maera aur shair ka.......do let me know the name ,OK!!!
[/QUOTE]

First of all Thank you for liking this,
I am sorry sis I don't know poet ka naam:-(

by the way Poetry ko kaii Pehluu say dekhna chahiye, Zaruri nahiN jo nazar Aa rahaa hay wuhii Haqeeqat bhii ho, OR? :)

Capricorn · December 15, 2002, 1:19pm

mujhey itnaa bataa denaa
wafa ki chaahton ki mash’alaiN kaesay bhujaatay haiN
NishaaN kaesay mitaatay haiN
bhulana ho jinhaiN unko bhala kaesay bhulatay haiN…!!

Beautiful poem GT :k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · December 16, 2002, 11:55am

Rameesha · December 17, 2002, 12:28am

Gul :k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 14, 2006, 1:50pm

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very nise:)

nstar777 · September 14, 2006, 1:55pm

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One of the best I ever heard!!!!!!!

Thanks for sharing

mahamkhan · September 15, 2006, 9:42am

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Very nice :)

IS · September 15, 2006, 9:50am

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[quote]

Ta'aluQ tuuT jaey jab
muhabbat Rooth jaey jab
tou phir Rasm-e- Dua kaesi

[/quote]

Nice Sharing :-)

Prince_Ali · September 15, 2006, 2:36pm

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very nice :k:

goodnews · September 15, 2006, 2:44pm

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tumhin kia hoa