**Ek umar bheet gayi tujhe pukartay huay
Ab na tu aaye ga toh may kyu jaloun?
Ek umar bheet gayi roote huay humay
Ab na ansoo ayein gay toh may kyu sahoun?
Iss ghum k haqdar hum her-giz na thay
Bardasht k phelo may dhaltay rahay
Azhare muhabat teri sachi na thi
Warna yeh takleefay milti nahi
Ab ghumo-shiqwa kisi ka nahi
Zindagi hai khoobsurat yeh meri rahi 
**
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**Ek umar bheet gayi tujhe pukartay huay Ab na tu aaye ga toh may kyu jaloun?
Ek umar bheet gayi roote huay humay Ab na ansoo ayein gay toh may kyu sahoun?
Iss ghum k haqdar hum her-giz na thay Bardasht k phelo may dhaltay rahay
Azhare muhabat teri sachi na thi Warna yeh takleefay milti nahi
Ab ghumo-shiqwa kisi ka nahi Zindagi hai khoobsurat yeh meri rahi :) **
Hmmm...not bad.... :) Welcome to Shora-e-Gupshup :)
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good try...you can write more beautifully...welcome here.
Re: Umar.....
**Ek umar bheet gayi tujhe pukartay huay Ab na tu aaye ga toh may kyu jaloun?
Ek umar bheet gayi roote huay humay Ab na ansoo ayein gay toh may kyu sahoun?
Iss ghum k haqdar hum her-giz na thay Bardasht k phelo may dhaltay rahay
Azhare muhabat teri sachi na thi Warna yeh takleefay milti nahi
Ab ghumo-shiqwa kisi ka nahi Zindagi hai khoobsurat yeh meri rahi :) **
..nice effort $ehar...Keep writing...:)
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..nice effort $ehar...Keep writing...:)
lol.. I try ;)
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Bhut he umdah Sehar :k:
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I am very happy that you appreciated and understood the deepness of my poem :)…
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Bohat khoob sehar bohat khoob
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Bohat achi koshish hai $ehar..:k: keep writing..