umar beeti jati hy

punjabi_kuri_1 · July 25, 2011, 4:20pm

**serdiyon ki sard aur udas shamon main aksar tumhari yaad ati hy
baithy huy peepal ky pairh k neechy wo hawain udaas kar jati hain

kitna chahun tujhy kitna yaad karti hun
din aur raat ub teri yaad main guzar jati hain

aj bhi yaad hy mujhy tumhary saath guzara wo her pal
jub bhi bhulana chahun tujhy na jany kyu ankhain chalak jati hain

tumhara her pal ka muskurana wo khilkhila ky hansna
aj bhi dil main ghoonjti tumhari hansi ki awaz byqrar kar jati hy

na jany kub khatam hogi is bychain dil ki byqrari
yahi sochty huy ub to umar beeti jati hy**

Amal · July 25, 2011, 4:29pm

Re: umar beeti jati hy

Nice one PK k: … thanx for sharing it with us

punjabi_kuri_1 · July 25, 2011, 4:38pm

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Shazia_Arif · July 26, 2011, 5:50am

Re: umar beeti jati hy

nice try :s
per mera bacha ye blank verse hai ya kuch or...well keep it up.

Azad · July 26, 2011, 6:46am

Re: umar beeti jati hy

Hummmmmm

Aryaan · July 26, 2011, 9:25pm

Re: umar beeti jati hy

Bohat Khoob Punjabi Kuri..:)