P_G
March 15, 2010, 5:10pm
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**ab Dil ko sanbhaalaiN k ghum-e-dil ko sanbhaalain **
**Fursat nahi itni bhi k do ashk baha lain **
**bay’taab ho tum bhi to judaai main kisi ki **
**mumkin ho to aa jaoo shab-e-hijr mana lain **
**tum aur kero zulf-e-pareshan ko pareshan **
**hum dil-e-betaab ko deewana bana lain **
bethain hain is andaaz se me’kash sar-e-mehfil
**saaqi ka ishaara ho to SAGHAR ko uchaalain **
ay ehl-e-junooN aao k weeraN hain shab’o roz
**ujri hoie mehfil ko phir ik baar jama lain **
Re: ujri hoie mehfil ko phir ik baar jama lain
fursat nahi itni bhee k do askh baha lain...
awesome
ps: behain hain is andaaz se???? ye "behain" kya word hay?
P_G
March 15, 2010, 5:50pm
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Re: ujri hoie mehfil ko phir ik baar jama lain
^ bethain hain ...typo mistake
TLK
March 15, 2010, 5:54pm
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Re: ujri hoie mehfil ko phir ik baar jama lain
Bohut khoob …awesome ..
Saaghar ko uchaalain?? … lets hope saaghar is made out of plastic
P_G
March 15, 2010, 6:01pm
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Re: ujri hoie mehfil ko phir ik baar jama lain
^ app idher kahan aagyee ...rolleyes
saaghar say muraad woh mashroob hai jo us kay andar hay ... smack
TLK
March 15, 2010, 6:04pm
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Re: ujri hoie mehfil ko phir ik baar jama lain
Kyun ji, hamain bhee shaa’eree ka bohut shoq hai
Saaghar sharab ke pyaalay ko kehtay hain mashroob ko nahi ..
P_G
March 15, 2010, 6:07pm
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Re: ujri hoie mehfil ko phir ik baar jama lain
^ shaair-e ka shoq or app ko ..yeh saaniha kub paish hoa faint ...
mainy arz kai saghaar say muraaad shaarab hay
shairee main tamaseel ka istimaal zyada hay
ik lafz bol ker us ka majazi maana muraad hota hai
samjh ayee shaire kay shoqeen sahab : P
Re: ujri hoie mehfil ko phir ik baar jama lain
v nice........
TLK
March 15, 2010, 6:13pm
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^ shaair-e ka shoq or app ko ..yeh saaniha kub paish hoa faint ...
mainy arz kai saghaar say muraaad shaarab hay
shairee main tamaseel ka istimaal zyada hay
ik lafz bol ker us ka majazi maana muraad hota hai
samjh ayee shaire kay shoqeen sahab : P
Aap ne shayad meri shaa'eri nahi parhee ab tuk, isee liye tanze ke teer chalaa rahee hain.
Mujhay yaqeen hai ke yeah tanz hee hai or aap tanz ko kisi majazi maa'nay main istemal ker ke mujh se dar-asal aqeedat ka izhar nahi ker rahi hain.
P_G
March 15, 2010, 6:19pm
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^ kiaaaaaaaaaaaa app shaireeeeeee bhi kertay ho : O : O : O
jaldee say perhaain phir ..pata chalay app ki is silahiyat ka
tanz nahi mujhay bay yaqeene hai ... : S
SAqi > thanx
TLK
March 15, 2010, 6:35pm
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PM kerdi hai apni sha'erii snooty
P_G
March 15, 2010, 6:37pm
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Re: ujri hoie mehfil ko phir ik baar jama lain
^ shukirya .. app yaqeenan shaire kay shoqeen ho ..ab mujhay koi aytraaz nahi
mera ik mashwera hay app apnay blog main woh post kero
bohat saray log enjoy kerain gay
TLK
March 15, 2010, 6:46pm
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Blog main do nazmain post kee theen (yeah wali to ghazlain theen) …bus jinhon ne enjoy kerna thaa, kiyaa .. baqiyaon ne ignore ker diya .. mere toliet paper walay blog ziyada hit jaatay hain. Sha’eri walay fail ho jaatay hain
P_G
March 15, 2010, 7:02pm
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Re: ujri hoie mehfil ko phir ik baar jama lain
^ nahi ab app ka director hona ..is ko fail nahi keray ga : P
TLK
March 15, 2010, 7:04pm
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Meri sari salahiyatain, meri directorship kee marhoon-e-minnat nahi hain.
P_G
March 15, 2010, 7:07pm
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Re: ujri hoie mehfil ko phir ik baar jama lain
^ silhaiyat ko serhanay k ley dirctor ship daal main tarkay ka kaam day gee
guusa na kerain werna ap kay hussan mainm ferq per jaye ga : D
Dania
March 15, 2010, 7:58pm
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bohat khoob