Re: Ujaarr rastoN meiN ronaqeiN qaafiloN sey hoti heiN
**jaarr rastoN meiN ronaqeiN qaafiloN sey hoti heiN kuch karaamateiN sar'zad ghafiloN sey hoti heiN
baarisheiN tey karti heiN khud hi manzil apni aur dasht ko shikayateiN baadloN sey hoti heiN
wesay tu saRi gazal he khubsurat hai lakin itni khubsurat nahi jitni pahlay hain sab ye 2 sheR awsome :) **
This ghazal started from the tail-end actually:) The very last line came very first in my mind. And when it comes to meanings and depth, being the writer of this ghazal, I believe maqta outweights the entire ghazal with a huge margin. It has the depth and contains imagination which is not visible in any other sheir in this ghazal. You may need to read it slowly, and a few more times :) The second last sheir is the second best sheir, third-last is third-best and so on and so forth :) But these are my personal observations. I may be wrong :) But thanx for liking it NikamiJi :)