Re: Ujaarr rastoN meiN ronaqeiN qaafiloN sey hoti heiN
hmmm a very well balanced poem Amal :) and comes out very simple with a bird's eye view
I did not even read the Roman when the actual script was there... :D
let's see:
ujaaR rastoN maiN ronaqaiN qaafloN saY hoti haiN
I am amazed at the depth of this simple line... ujaaR rastoN maiN..... there can not be a ronaq with one or few individuals.. I guess you only get lonliness in that situation :-))))))
Kuch karaamataiN sarzad ghaafiloN saY hoti haiN
I can totally relate this to my creation of poetry instead of relating in to the first misra:D however, does it mean that ujaaR rastoN maiN qaaflaY sirf ghaflat saY hee nazar aataY haiN????
Naadaan banaataY hee naheeN kissi ko sahaaraa apnaa
I will have to think about it... being a total naadaan, I think I have taken refuge in my desires... but then, it depends on the definition of Naadaan .. right?
Yeh ghalatiyaaN tau aksar aaqiloN saY hoti haiN
that's very ironic though.... Aaqil bhee ghalatiyaaN karnaY laggaiN geY tay naadaanoN kaa kiya hogaa :)?
BaarishaiN taY karti haiN khud hee manzil apni
althought it seems that baarishoN kee manzil hawaaiN taY karaati haiN but I do agree that baarish har jagah naheeN barasti... :-)
aur dasht ko shikaayataiN baadaloN say hoti haiN
may be baadal play the director role and baarish as a mod of that forum... errr.... sorry behak gayaa :P
Raah-e-mohabbat maiN jaaN saY jaanaY waaloN ko
sunnaa hai hamdardiyaaN qaatiloN saY hoti haiN
hmmm.. suni sunaai baatoN par yaqeen naheeN kartaY :p .... khair khair... yeh sirf aik jumla-e-mo'tariza thaa.... but I think for them, they think all murderers are Mehboob of some one ;-)
Falsafa-e-Ishq maiN haiN qurbat kaY mafhoom alag
haaN wisl aur hij'r maiN gham-e-jaanaaN bhee gham-e-dauraaN hee lagtaa hai naa :)
Yeh ghalat hai kaY dooriyaaN faasloN saY hoti haiN
haaN, faasloN say tau sirf ehsaasaat janam laitaY haiN.. mohabbataiN baRhti haiN.... kabhi kabhi nafrataiN kamm bhee hoti haiN aur kabhi nafrataiN janam leti haiN .... dooriyaaN tau rawwaiyoN saY baRhti haiN naa bhai...
You have almost caputred the entire working behind the scene. May be because you are also a writer 