Uff !

**Uff! **

Ashk peetay hi rehay lub seetay hi rehay
Dabaa kay izhaar-I-tamanna kay khwaab
Bus ik beshakl si zindagi jeetay hi rehay

Kuch aisay diyay hawaadis taqdeer nay mujhko
Key na huNs sakay unpay na kabhi ro hi sakay
Majboor-i-fitrat meri kuch taqaazaa-i-halaat uska
Apnaa sakay usko na kabhi kho hi sakay

MaiNnay taraashay thay khalwat main
Husn-o-ishq kay jo sehar khwaab
Aur jinmaiN bharay rung-i-bedaar laykar
Apnay tamaam ilm-o-ahsaas

Unpay bhikhar gayee amaawus ki siyaahiaN
Aur meray daaman main reh gayeeN bus TanhaaiaN


Meanings:Hwaadis- accidents,Khalwat-solitude,rung-e-bedaar- colours of consciousness, amaawus-no moon night

Re: Uff !

Brijinder sahab, bohat khoob bayaan kiya hey aap ney. Aap pehley bhi haqeeqat sey nazdeek-tar ho kar likhtey rahey heiN, lekin merey nazdeek aek khaas baat, is tehreer mein aek nasr hey, aek khaas qisam ka rhythm hey. Pehley jo aap post kartey the, they look bare facts, this looks coated facts. And in my humble view, it is necessary in poetry to coat your stuff. While it doesn't dilute facts, coating makes it more presentable and appealing. Thanx for shairing it with us :)

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wah ji, birjinder man, great poem.

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I am very thankful to both of you for your warm words.