fara
January 20, 2011, 2:58pm
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Visal Rut Ki Yeh Pehli Dastak Hi Sarzanish Hay
Kay Hijr Mousam Ne Rastey Rastey Safar Ka Aaghaz Kar Diya Hay
Mery Haathon Ka Lams Jab b Teri Wafa Ki Hathelion Par Hina Banay Ga To Soch Lena
Rafaqaton Ka Sunehra Sooraj Gharoob k Imtehan Mein Hay
Hamarey Baaghon Se Gar Titlion Ki Khushboo Guzar Na Paye To Yeh Na Kehna
k Titlion Ne Gulab Rastey Badal Liye Hain
Agar Koi Sham Yun b Aye k Jis Mein Hum Tum Lagay Paraye To Jan Lena
k Sham Be-Bas Thi Tareekion k Haathon
***Tumhari Khuwahish Ki Muthiyan Be Dhayani Mein Kabhi Khulay ***To Yaqeen Karna
k Meri Chahat k Jugno’oun Ne
Tumharey Haathon k Lams-e-Taza Ki Khuwahishon Mein
Barey Ghanery Andhery Kaatey
Magar Yeh Khadshey,Yeh Waswasey To Takallufan Hain
Jo Be Irada Safar Pe Nikley
To Yeh To Hota Hay Yeh To Hoga
Hum Apney Jazbon Ko Manjumand Raeganiyon k Sapurd Kar k Yeh Soch Lein Ge
k Hijr Mousam To Wasl Ki Pehli Sham Se Hi Safar Ka Aaghaz Kar Chuka Tha…!!!
Amal
January 20, 2011, 3:03pm
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Re: Udass Shaam Ki Aik Nazam
Some people say that the original and the most powerful branch of poetry is ghazal and they love to write nazm off. Those must see this poem, and countless others.
fara bohat jaadui si nazm hey, I was lost for a while :tearya:
fara
January 20, 2011, 3:07pm
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Re: Udass Shaam Ki Aik Nazam
I know. I love Nazam too, when its a well written one like this one...
Re: Udass Shaam Ki Aik Nazam
very well written awesome :k:
Re: Udass Shaam Ki Aik Nazam
i always prefers nazm over ghazals, even in my own poetry. and this master piece gives you the solid reason of "WHY"
fara
January 20, 2011, 3:14pm
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Re: Udass Shaam Ki Aik Nazam
Thankewww peeplaaN
Re: Udass Shaam Ki Aik Nazam
Touchy :k:
Re: Udass Shaam Ki Aik Nazam
v nice Fara...i don't know from where u got this master piece...awsome.
Re: Udass Shaam Ki Aik Nazam
Bahut umdaah intikhaab fara …:k:
