Udasiyon kay chehray

Zhind · February 10, 2008, 9:05pm

Udasiyon kay chehray parha mat karoo
Ghazal ansuon se likha mat karoo

Behar haal yee aag hee aag hean
Chiraghon ko aise chowa mat karoo

Duaa ansoon mean khilla phool hay
Kise kay liyee badua mat karoo

Tumheen loog kehnay lageen bewafaa
Zamnay say itne wafaa mat karoo

Ager waqaie tum preshan hoo
Kise urr say tazkira mat karoo

Khuda kay liye chandne raat mean
Akelay akelay phira mat karoo

Aryaan · February 10, 2008, 9:07pm

Re: Udasiyon kay chehray

Very Nice Zhind.. and welcome to GS..:)

Koyal · February 11, 2008, 3:06am

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Gud 1 Zind and welcome here if U really new :)

Shab-e-Hijar · February 11, 2008, 3:41am

Re: Udasiyon kay chehray

nice sharing zhind .. and welcome here :)

redidentity · February 11, 2008, 4:29am

Re: Udasiyon kay chehray

Welcome

gr8 Poem.. :k:

bheegiyaad · February 12, 2008, 9:22pm

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nice one :k:

Shumaisa · February 13, 2008, 6:20am

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:k:

ASA · February 13, 2008, 6:32am

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*nice.. *

Zhind · February 13, 2008, 10:11am

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thanks for admiration :)

mirage · February 13, 2008, 8:52pm

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Exquisite imagery. This is why Bashir Badar is my so fav. Nice choice.

Zhind · February 14, 2008, 1:11pm

Re: Udasiyon kay chehray

yes its Bashir badar with simple wording

Sheal · February 14, 2008, 6:39pm

Re: Udasiyon kay chehray

nice :)