UdaasiyoN ka sabab jo likHna

_Nazish · February 5, 2003, 3:08am

“udaasiyoN ka sabab jo likhna
to yah bhi likhna
ke chaand, taare, shahaab aankheN badal gaye haiN
woh zinda lamHe jo teri raahoN meN
tere aane ke muntazir the
woh thak ke saayoN meN dhhal gaye haiN
woh teri yaadeN, kheyaal tere, woh ranj tere, malaal tere
woh teri aankheN, sawaal tere
woh tum se mere tamaam rishte bichaRh gaye haiN, ujaRh gaye haiN
udaasiyoN ka sabab jo likhna
to yah bhi likhna
larazte haunToN pe larhkhrhaati duaa ke suuraj
pighhal gaye haiN
tamaam sapne hi jal gaye haiN..”

ke ab kuchh nahiN bacha..

(Farhat abbas shah)

chand_chehra · February 5, 2003, 3:43am

very nice :k:
thanks for sharing

hayaa · February 5, 2003, 3:56am

it's beautiful

Dilsay · February 5, 2003, 5:07am

Beautiful..........

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 5, 2003, 5:08am

my fav one:k:
thanks:flower1:

Dragon_King · February 5, 2003, 7:23am

buhat khoob :k:

Azad · February 5, 2003, 11:54am

:k: :k: :k:
Waqii ishq main sub kuch jal jata hay seway Allah kay

Nazish thanks for sharing, udass karna to koi aap say seekhay

Paglee · February 5, 2003, 12:11pm

:k: one of ma fav..thanks 4 sharin…

Capricorn · February 5, 2003, 1:52pm

Re: UdaasiyoN ka sabab jo likHna

Buhat khoobsurat poem hai Nazish..thanks for sharing :k:

system · February 5, 2003, 5:18pm

Bohat khoob, thanx 4 sharing.. :k:

Amal · February 5, 2003, 5:28pm

Re: UdaasiyoN ka sabab jo likHna

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *
"udaasiyoN ka sabab jo likhna
to yah bhi likhna
ke chaand, taare, shahaab aankheN badal gaye haiN
woh zinda lamHe jo teri raahoN meN
tere aane ke muntazir the
woh thak ke saayoN meN dhhal gaye haiN
woh teri yaadeN, kheyaal tere, woh ranj tere, malaal tere
woh teri aankheN, sawaal tere
woh tum se mere tamaam rishte bichaRh gaye haiN, ujaRh gaye haiN
udaasiyoN ka sabab jo likhna
to yah bhi likhna
larazte haunToN pe larhkhrhaati duaa ke suuraj
pighhal gaye haiN
tamaam sapne hi jal gaye haiN.."

ke ab kuchh nahiN bacha..

(Farhat abbas shah)
[/QUOTE]

Usually I go through a piece and take out the best
portion to quote it. That, I always feel, is a
better way to express my admiration in a way that
will make the poet proud of its creation. This poem
always stops me from carrying out my exercise. It's
a perfect beauty in every sense of the word. Thanx
~Nazish~ for such an amazing nazm.

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 5, 2003, 5:53pm

very nice :)

_Nazish · February 6, 2003, 2:36am

Thanks for liking it everyone

Ham kisi ko kya udaas karen gey, ham tou khud udaas log hain. Bas in nazmoN aur sheroN ke zarriye dil ka boj halka ho jata hai

WiseGuy · February 6, 2003, 2:56am

Re: UdaasiyoN ka sabab jo likHna

Bohat Khoob, wah wah wah :k: :k: :k: :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 6, 2003, 12:48pm

Re: UdaasiyoN ka sabab jo likHna

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *
"udaasiyoN ka sabab jo likhna
to yah bhi likhna
ke chaand, taare, shahaab aankheN badal gaye haiN
woh zinda lamHe jo teri raahoN meN
tere aane ke muntazir the
woh thak ke saayoN meN dhhal gaye haiN
woh teri yaadeN, kheyaal tere, woh ranj tere, malaal tere
woh teri aankheN, sawaal tere
woh tum se mere tamaam rishte bichaRh gaye haiN, ujaRh gaye haiN
udaasiyoN ka sabab jo likhna
to yah bhi likhna
larazte haunToN pe larhkhrhaati duaa ke suuraj
pighhal gaye haiN
tamaam sapne hi jal gaye haiN.."

ke ab kuchh nahiN bacha..

(Farhat abbas shah)
[/QUOTE]

Amazing stuff, Thanks for sharing.

_Nazish · February 8, 2003, 5:14am

Thanks for liking it :)

Azad · February 16, 2003, 6:57pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *
Thanks for liking it everyone :)

Ham kisi ko kya udaas karen gey, ham tou khud udaas log hain. Bas in nazmoN aur sheroN ke zarriye dil ka boj halka ho jata hai :)
[/QUOTE]

Waqee

Kaisay jeetay hain jinhain taqat e izhaar nahi
Apnay to dard ka darmaan hay ** Ghazal **khwan hona

sanctified · February 23, 2003, 9:34pm

woow

KEy ab kuch nahee bacha !!! Wah

Capricorn · February 23, 2003, 9:54pm

Mera to dil aur ziyada udas ho jata hai