Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna,
to ye bhi likhna
kay chand taaray,
shahaab ankhien badal gaye hain
wo zinda lamhay jo teri raahon mein
tere anay kay muntazir thay
wo thak kay raahon mien dhel gaye hain
wo teri yaadien, khayal tere,
wo ranj tere, milaal tere
wo teri ankhein, sawal tere
wo tum say mere tamaam
rishtay bichar gaye hain,
ujadh gaye hian
udaasioon ka sabab jo likna
to ye bhi likhna
leraztay hoonton pe larhkharhti,
dua kay soraj
peghal gaye hain
tamaam sapnay he jal gaye hain
baad marnay ke tum meri kahani likna
kese hoi bardaad meri jawani likhna
ye bhi likhna kay mere hoont hansi ko tarsay kese
bahta raha meri ankhoon say pani likna.

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

how sad...really nice read...

poet?

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

WoW
bohat khoob
i guess k yea farhat abas shah ke hay but not sure
coz kafi arsay pehlay mai nay yea kesi book mai say parhi ti :)

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

m not poet got frm some 1 so juz thought to share wid friends :)

Mighe be IS :)

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

tamaam sapnay he jal gaye hain ...

its amaizng how certain feelings can scatter those dreams and certain can ruin them in fire.....

decent munda... you are decent after all- nice collection

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

it taken so long to getinto a relationship deeply and et the break so easly, but leave the memories .really nice poem and rely deep Departures are wounds no one can heel, Memories are pleasures no one can steel

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna…

UdaasiyoN kaa Sabab jo likhaa
tau yeh bhee likhnaa

what a poem…

laikin kaun likhta hai abb udaasiyoN kay sabab?

woh runj teraY
malaal teraY

woh tum saY meraY tamaam
rishtaY bichaR gaYe haiN
ujaRh gaYe haiN…
UdaasiyoN kaa Sabab jo likhaa
tau yeh bhee likhnaa

how so true :flower1:

:slight_smile: thanks for sharing …

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna…

Thanx A Lot Eve 1 :flower:

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

buhat khoob buhat umda janab thanks for sharing

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna…

Very beautiful poem Decent^Munda:k:…thanx for sharing :slight_smile:

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

desi muda one of my fav "udasioN ka sabab likhna" ...........per time kahan itna kisi k pass likhnay ko :(

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

lovely DM, one of my fav... from Noshi Gilani's poetry

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

v nice collection ........................ really touching one

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

Thanx a lot Friends :)

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

great one DM bhai kabhe kabhe atye hen app but great post i really like it wasy or kia kia likhna ya bhe bata dien or hisab bhe

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

hmm...nice one

Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

this one is my fav nazam. super carry on.:)