Words are something that touches the soul deeply and left an everlasting charm,The poetry comes from the Inspirations, fantacies,thoughts and Feelings, sometimes a dimlighted star inspires us more then a full moon of 14th,a yellow leaf from autum awakes our emotions and a dark Red rose fail to do so, A little pain brings those Hidden tears of our eyes that were not sheded during the worst experiances of Life so its just the way we think and the way we observe the different colors of life,My words will not shockedly impressed you but I m sure that my little Awaz-e-sukhan will touch you a little slightly.
Kabhi waqt miley to sochna-kun rehtey ho itney udas tum?
Kun hai itni afsurdagi-kun ho gaye ho beaas tum?
Kahan gun hoeen tumhari khushboo en?-kun ho gaye ho bebaas tum?
Kahan kho gayeen woh khilkhilahaten?kun pehentey nahee shokh libaas tum
Chalo hum hi tumhain batatey hain-woh qissa phir sey sunatey hain
Woh sab hi they tohfey Muhabbat key-woh khushboo en woh muskurahaten
Ab khilkhilahatoon main udas sa-aik chand jhankney laga hai
waqt tum sey tumhari muhabbat ka-khiraaj maangney laga hai
Phir tumhain is waqt ka-qarz utaarna hi tha
Judaioon ka bilaakhir-hisaab chukana hi tha
To khushboo en sab hawa hoo een-woh shokh rang phir kahan hoye
phir yun hua key muskurahaten -aansoo on main badal gaeen
un shokh libasoon key bhi-sab rang pheekey parh gaye
woh beech judai ka boya tha jo-phool usmain aa gaye
Tumharey dil key khuaab sab-khadshey milker kha gaye
Ab batao hamain chor ker tum ko kia mil gaya?
Kia khushioon main tumharey naam ka aik qura bhi khual gaya???
First of all, welcome to GS:flower1: As far as your
poem is concerned, frankly speaking, your
definition of poetry seems more impressive than
your poem. It shows how beautifully you can touch
some subjects that are difficult to be wrapped up
in poems. Hope to see something more powerful that
will truly match your strength and potential.
Like Amal said your definition of poetry is really impressive, more impressive than the poem. The poem is nice too.
Keep up the good work :k: hope to see more poems by you.
[QUOTE] Originally posted by Amarbail: *
Words are something that touches the soul deeply and left an everlasting charm,The poetry comes from the Inspirations, fantacies,thoughts and Feelings, sometimes a dimlighted star inspires us more then a full moon of 14th,a yellow leaf from autum awakes our emotions and a dark Red rose fail to do so, A little pain brings those Hidden tears of our eyes that were not sheded during the worst experiances of Life so its just the way we think and the way we observe the different colors of life,My words will not shockedly impressed you but I m sure that my little **Awaz-e-sukhan* will touch you a little slightly.
Kabhi waqt miley to sochna-kun rehtey ho itney udas tum?
Kun hai itni afsurdagi-kun ho gaye ho beaas tum?
Kahan gun hoeen tumhari khushboo en?-kun ho gaye ho bebaas tum?
Kahan kho gayeen woh khilkhilahaten?kun pehentey nahee shokh libaas tum
Chalo hum hi tumhain batatey hain-woh qissa phir sey sunatey hain
Woh sab hi they tohfey Muhabbat key-woh khushboo en woh muskurahaten
Ab khilkhilahatoon main udas sa-aik chand jhankney laga hai
waqt tum sey tumhari muhabbat ka-khiraaj maangney laga hai
Phir tumhain is waqt ka-qarz utaarna hi tha
Judaioon ka bilaakhir-hisaab chukana hi tha
To khushboo en sab hawa hoo een-woh shokh rang phir kahan hoye
phir yun hua key muskurahaten -aansoo on main badal gaeen
un shokh libasoon key bhi-sab rang pheekey parh gaye
woh beech judai ka boya tha jo-phool usmain aa gaye
Tumharey dil key khuaab sab-khadshey milker kha gaye
Ab batao hamain chor ker tum ko kia mil gaya?
Kia khushioon main tumharey naam ka aik qura bhi khual gaya?????
k::k: