udaas shamooN ko canvas pe utar laatey ho

Koyal · March 27, 2005, 6:54pm

meri pasand jantey ho
meri kamzori se waqif ho
is leay surakh gulaab ki adh kali beshumaar kalyaaN
meary sarhanay chor jatey ho
meri wahshtooN ko samjtey ho
is leay doobtey suraj aur
udaas shamooN ko canvas pe utar laatey ho
meri tanhaa’eooN se waqif ho
is leay har saal meri salgeera pe
suraj ki pahli kiran k sath
salgeera mubarak kahnay pohnch jatey ho
magar tum ye nahi jantey k
meri pasand, meri kamzorioN, meri udasiooN
aur tanhaa’eooN se waqif honay k bawajood be!
*meri soochooN ka **mehvaR *tum nahi ho

Shab-e-Hijar · March 28, 2005, 2:49am

Re: udaas shamooN ko canvas pe utar laatey ho

very nice :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 29, 2005, 12:44am

Re: udaas shamooN ko canvas pe utar laatey ho

meri wahshtooN ko samjtey ho
is leay doobtey suraj aur
udaas shamooN ko canvas pe utar laatey ho

bohut khoob .. :-) ..

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 29, 2005, 4:43am

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Very Nice… Tnx

Azad · March 30, 2005, 6:48pm

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hummm

Koyal · April 2, 2005, 11:42am

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thanks shaboo:)

Koyal · April 2, 2005, 11:42am

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thanks Gkk:)

Koyal · April 2, 2005, 11:44am

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Koyal · April 2, 2005, 11:44am

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GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 7, 2005, 1:14pm

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Buhat changi nazm Koyal ji Shaair ka naam nahi likhaa:-)

Koyal · April 8, 2005, 11:29pm

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thanks Gul jahan se parhi thei shaier ka name nahi tha aur shaed jisey ap sooch tehi hain ye wo nahi hia blush:

AQ · April 9, 2005, 1:39am

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magar tum ye nahi jantey k
meri pasand, meri kamzorioN, meri udasiooN
aur tanhaa'eooN se waqif honay k bawajood be!
meri soochooN ka mehvaR tum nahi ho

WoW :)

Dilsay · April 9, 2005, 7:07am

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Very nice khush rahoo...

WiseGuy · April 9, 2005, 8:10am

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very nice

reet · April 9, 2005, 9:24am

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meri wahshtooN ko samjtey ho
is leay doobtey suraj aur
udaas shamooN ko canvas pe utar laatey ho

very nice...... ** Koyal ** g..... thnx for sharing.......

SunnyBoy · April 9, 2005, 4:46pm

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nice

ullujii · April 9, 2005, 7:38pm

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Wonderfull :)

Koyal · April 10, 2005, 3:11am

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Koyal · April 10, 2005, 3:11am

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thanks SB ap kahan hotey haiN aj kal:)

Koyal · April 10, 2005, 1:02pm

Re: udaas shamooN ko canvas pe utar laatey ho

wo aaien post main khuda ki qudrat