Wisaal rut ki yay pehli dastak hi sarznish hai
Keh hijr kay mousam nay ristay ristay safer ka aaghaz kia
Tumharay hathooN ka lams
Jab bhi meri wafa ki hatheliyooN per hinaa banay ga
To sooch loon gi
RafaqatooN ka sunehra sooraj ghuroob kay imtehan main hai
Hamaray baghooN say gar kabhi titliyooN ki khushboo
Guzar na pa’ay to yay kehna
Keh titliyooN nay gulab rastay badal liyay haiN
Ager koi shaam youn bhi a’ay
Keh jis main hum tumhaiN lagaiN para’ay
To jaan lena
Keh shaam baybas thi shab ki tareekiyooN k hathooN
Tumhari khwahish ki muthiyaaN
Bay dhiyaniyooN main kabhi khulaiN to yaqeen kerna
Keh meri chah kay jugno’oN nay
Tumharay hath kay lams-e-tazah ki khwahishooN main
Baray ghanay andhairay katay
Mager yay khadshay yay waswasay to takalfan haiN
Jo bay irada safer per niklaiN
To yay to hota hai, yay to ho ga
Hum apnay jazbooN ko
Munjmid raiganiyooN kay supurd ker kay yay sooch laiN gay
Keh hijr mousam to wasal ki pehli shaam say hi
safer ka aaghaz ker chuka hai
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eh hijr mousam to wasal ki pehli shaam say hi
safer ka aaghaz ker chuka hai ..:hinna:
nice :k:
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thankooo :D
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v nice sharing Sheal and welcome back :)
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thank you nikami ji ![]()
Re: Udaas Sham Ki Ek Nazam
:k: gud sis
Re: Udaas Sham Ki Ek Nazam
Bohat khoob Sheal..:k:
Re: Udaas Sham Ki Ek Nazam
Buaht Khoob :k:
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Beautiful..
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Thanks BL, Aryaan, Ali and Ahmer :)
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Nice poem Sheal dear!
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Mager yay khadshay yay waswasay to takalfan haiN
Jo bay irada safer per niklaiN
To yay to hota hai, yay to ho ga
Hum apnay jazbooN ko
Munjmid raiganiyooN kay supurd ker kay yay sooch laiN gay
Keh hijr mousam to wasal ki pehli shaam say hi
safer ka aaghaz ker chuka hai
**After a long long time some poem caught my attention ...... really its facination and it seems someone has written this poem for me :(
Anyway nice post ...keep it up ........ **
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amazing metaphorical use of words :k:
Re: Udaas Sham Ki Ek Nazam
tashreef lanay ka shukria ![]()
Re: Udaas Sham Ki Ek Nazam
nice sharing Sheal :)