Ubb kaisey?

[Dushwari]

Kyoon ker munkir kiya seb eitebaar?
Ubb kahan ka ho kaisa malal?
Ubb kaiseye uthaoon wohh peiker sawal?
Kiya soojha jo tarek kiya saman-e-Mukhlis sansar?
Ubb theekh hey juda rahen, dil kasta hal?
Ubb kaisey banoon aik dard mend dhal?
Keb chowra sath ka parahein itna bhee baki sahar?
Ubb kis ko bana laya ho ga tu apnee beykasee ka har?
Ubb kaiseye poochoon koe guzashta ehval?

Dushwari

[rkopra]

Re: Ubb kaisey?

Kyoon ker munkir kiya seb eitebaar? Ubb kahan ka ho kaisa malal? Ubb kaiseye uthaoon wohh peiker sawal? Kiya soojha jo tarek kiya saman-e-Mukhlis sansar? Ubb theekh hey juda rahen, dil kasta hal? Ubb kaisey banoon aik dard mend dhal? Keb chowra sath ka parahein itna bhee baki sahar? Ubb kis ko bana laya ho ga tu apnee beykasee ka har? Ubb kaiseye poochoon koe guzashta ehval?

Dushwari

Khoob.

Dushwari, there are very few poems that ask questions in each line. one of them is yours, yours own. You ask, but tell at the same time what's in your heart, and that's the beauty of this poem. I like your poetry. Cheers.

[Dushwari]

Re: Ubb kaisey?

thanks, rkopra.
poetry is another name of expressing one's feeling for something clear transparent and spontaneous, perhaps that is why it might have come across they way you praised it.

Best,

Dushwari

[rkopra]

Re: Ubb kaisey?

thanks, rkopra. poetry is another name of expressing one's feeling for something clear transparent and spontaneous, perhaps that is why it might have come across they way you praised it.

Best,

Dushwari

Yes** Dushwari*, you sure are transparent and spontaneous in expressing your feelings unlike some self announced *ustaad of poetry who shamelessly mulls over words for stringing together his ghateeya ghazals of Urdu poetry.