Tzaad

[Brijinder]

Tzaad

YaadoN kay bawaNdar say uth rahaiN hai Takh_yul ki sar zamiN pay
Barq bau kay chamkta hai teri afsurda haNsee ka chehra
Honay lagi hai teray naaz-o-karam ki rimjhim
Meri takhleeq maiN main woh pehli barsaat si soundhi khusbu aa rahi hai

Tanha bahut tanha hai dil teray jaanay kay baad
SaMbhla nahi wajood shorishoN maiN bhi doob jaanay kay baad
Zamanaa to samjhtaa hai isay shauq-i-fitoor mera
Har chahray maiN agar dhooNdta hooN teray wajood ki parchaiNaN
Aur uqta kay uth aataa hooN phir apnay khyaaloN ki duniya maiN
Siyaah aur siyaah ho jaati haiN phir meri tanhaaiyaaN

Ab tu bani hai kisi ga_ir ki zindagi ka unwaaN
Ab teri raataiN uski baahoN main basi rehti haiN
Ab na us ulfat ki haqeeqat baqi
Phir bhi nadaan umeedaiN dil maiN baniN rehtiN haiN

Puchta hooN maiN aksar apni talkh raatoN say
Ki kya hai aqaayud-i-mehabbat ki asaas
Kya hai yeh rasoomaaat maiN lipta ik shuq-i-bekaar
Kya hai yeh ishq kay naam pay paltay huay pazmurda ahsaas

Kya hai yeh mehabbat yeh mehabbat ki tashheeer
Kadam bar kadam samjotoN ki besood taameer
Kya hai yeh jis-o-rooh kay alag alag meyaar
Kya hai parstish pay palta yeh falsafa-i-taqdeer

Thehar ab zauq-i-talab thehar
Aaj na yeh baat baat uthaa
Aaj ki raat barstaa hai gujishta mehabbat ka jaadoo
Aaa ki raat kuch na keh kuch na sunaa

Tzaad- takraav
Takh_yul-imagination, Barq-bijli, Afsurda-udaas,
Takhleeq-creation(rachna),Shorish-shor shraabaa
Shauq-i-fitoor- pagalpan ka shauq,
Aqaayud-i-mehabbat- prem kay prati vishwaas,
Asaas-foundation,rasoomat-rasmaiN,pazmurda-adhmaray
Tashheer-advertisment,besood-useless,tameer-nirmaan,
Gujishta-beeta hua
----- Brijinder “sagar”

[Azad]

Re: Tzaad

hummm

[Dushwari]

Re: Tzaad

brijinder,
very nice poem.
got inspired.
wrote this as is below.
best,
Dushwari

zerf kee benaee iss meye hoti,
tow kiya hoteye iss keye raat, aur kiya din
herr koe lau ka diya sa hota iss ka
raat aur iss ka din
herr lefz, sunta aur wohh sunata, jeiseye bol
wird hoon ulfet kee shanasaee ka,
jenhein sunaney kee zarooret na hoti,
iss ko,
mhesoos kerta, wohh herr
raat aur din
...
peltee ho chaheye shakook kee parastish seye taqdeer,
iss kee,
janeye heye wohh, iss kee
dua ka zaur itna kemzaur nahi
himet aik dil-lagi kee itni beye jaur nahi
tow yeye ubb jo shaduq-e-fatoor heye baki, baad ka
hurmet-e-izzet ke heye jo iss neye begaree hovee
apni hee zaat aur kiya iss neye apneye sanem ko mayoos-ter
aik geam zeda see numb pultee
afsos, keye tu na rekh saka ser apna iss keye
kandhee perr,
na mhesoos ker saka
aur wohh soundhi kushboo kebhi
jis ka tujheye ubb ayeye khiyal koe?
...
ubb destaa heye tujh ko farar apna?
herr aik chereye meye yoon,
tu mujheye dhoondata heye ubb?
...
kiya baat kerta heye tu umeedoon keee, aye dost?
jiseye yeye na pata ho, nahi kheteye beye sabri keye sath
beygana ho ker, unjana bhen kerr, zulm itna
ser dard paa ker auroon kee nakhushi kee,
itna ziyada, itna seb??
keye jis ko tha tu neye izhar kiya apni chahet ka,
usi ko boleye, wohh jaa laeye aik aur sanem??
yeye tha iss kee lau ka tasavur iss keye zehan meye,
itna sa, itna kem??
...
is beyekhiyali ko tu, kis per ilzaam deita heye?
hazaar battoon keye baad,
jo bataein iss neye, bareye garoor keye sath
keye zulmee heye,
nigl liya meira seb aitebaar, aiseye
wohh inhi apneye kaheye ko seb,
jhooth sabit ker giya, aiseye
...
areye na kereye gaem wohh, tow acha heye
jis ko jhuthlaya iss neye, wohh ubb iss ka na
raheye, tow acha heye

mager, wohh tow ajj bhi heye pur num, wafadaar,
dil meye liyeye iss kee beye-basee,
iss kee bey-hisee kee sulaghta fishaar
...
mager, kisi aur ko nahi aneye diya
iss neye kareeb apneye,
wohh iss neye nahi kiyeye berbaad,
apni taref seye diyeye wadey saareye
wohh aisee nahi heye, teiree jeisee
ya unn jeisee jis ko tu neye ubb apnaya
aur heye apni zarooretoon kee nazr ker dala
...
wohh, wohh heye, dost,
teiree siyah ratoon meye shayid keye heye
aur raheye gee, jis kee kemee...
...
tu ker jaa ubb keye kutch aisa
key wohh maan leye
keye tujheye setcha ikhtiyaar heye apneye hal peye
yara, tu jaan giya heye,
keye wohh janti heye tujh ko,
tujh seye bhether, tujh seye bhaerh ker
...
tu apni sakh meye seye tazaad dhoondh chuka heye tow phir
tu azad khiyal kyoon nahi heye ubb tek???
ageye behreye tow, ager aik dil seye setcheye
shayid keye tu jaan sakeye,
tujheye nahi maloom, yeye lau keye dhagheye
hoteye hein kitney gheireye, kitneye pakeye!

Dushwari

[Azad]

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hummm achi koshish hay :k:

p.s.

hum bhi inspire hone ka soch rahay the magar
bahir sardi bohut hay or bukhaar taiz

[Dushwari]

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^ aap sotchteye raheien tow acha heye.
thendh garem ho jaye gee, khood ba khood.
best,
Dushwari

[Azad]

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jee koshish ki par sochna mushkil kaam hay. waise mashwaray ka shukriya .. .

thendh garem ho jaye gee, khood ba khood.

^tazad ghalban issi ko kehte hain.

[Dushwari]

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hmmmmm.

[Shab-e-Hijar]

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Kya hai yeh mehabbat yeh mehabbat ki tashheeer
Kadam bar kadam samjotoN ki besood taameer
Kya hai yeh jis-o-rooh kay alag alag meyaar
Kya hai parstish pay palta yeh falsafa-i-taqdeer

very nice :k:

[Brijinder]

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I am very very thankful to u all for these warm words of appreciation.And Dushwari saheb,your attempt is really appreciable.I am glad that my nazm managed to evoke such strong emotions with in you n compel you to crystallise your own thoughts n emotions,

[Dushwari]

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brijinder, for the record, i happen to be a female. kindly address me as such.
thanks for appreciating my inspired piece of writing.
best,
Dushwari

[Brijinder]

Re: Tzaad

Oops!!! Oops!I also thought that Dushwari is a feminine but was still not sure if you are male or female.I hope my apolgies will be accpeted.

[Dushwari]

Re: Tzaad

brijindar,
no worries.
best,
Dushwari