Two Poems..

redidentity · September 11, 2007, 6:08am

Meri 2 Poems Jo Aik He Ground Pe Likhi Hain Mainay, Socha Aik Saath Share Ker Doon..

(1)

Ek Teray Rooth Janay Se
Saari Dunya Khafa Si Lagti Hai

Jab Hon Chaaron Taraf Ye Sannatay
Dil Ki Dharkan Sada Si Lagti Hai

Her Samay Jab Azaab Utrain Tou
Zindagi Khud Qaza Si Lagti Hai

Aise Lamhay Pe Teray Honton Per
Muskurahat Duaa Si Lagti Hai

Sochna Tum Ko, Tum Ko Sochtay Rehna
Ye Aadat Bhi Dil-Ruba Si Lagti Hai

Teri Aankhon Main Saadgi Itni
Kion Tuu Sab Se Juda Si Lagti Hai

(2)

Teray Honton Pe Itni Khamoshi
Aur Aankhon Main Ek Sada Si Lagti Hai

Kion Tuu Hans Bol Ke Nahi Milti
Kion Tuu Mujh Se Khafa Si Lagti Hai

Teri Aankhain Sada Ki Qaatil Hain
Inn Main Her Damm Qaza Si Lagti Hai

Teray Aanchal Ke Saa-ay Main Bethoon
Iss Khushboo, Hina Si Lagti Hai

Teray Aanay Se Phool Khiltay Hain
Kitni Dilkash Fiza Si Lagti Hai

Teri Guftaar Main Hai Sheereeni
Aur Lehjay Main Ek Adaa Si Lagti Hai

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

AQ · September 11, 2007, 6:31am

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aik hee ground? National Stadium jaa kar likhi theeN:D?

waisaY.. shaandaar poems haiN :)

redidentity · September 11, 2007, 6:40am

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Aik He Zameen Per Na.. :$

Wese Thnx.. :)

AQ · September 11, 2007, 6:42am

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abaY woh tau mujhaY bhee maaloom hai what you meant... buss jiss tarah tum naY ground likhaa thaa, as a layman, meraY shaitaani dimaagh maiN yehi aayaa thaa :p

redidentity · September 11, 2007, 6:44am

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:) haww aap shaitani hain?

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 11, 2007, 7:03am

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Nice poems Ahmer, keep it up:-)

redidentity · September 11, 2007, 7:14am

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Thanks Gul Jee.. :)

SJ · September 11, 2007, 7:43am

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redidentity:

Meri 2 Poems Jo Aik He Ground Pe Likhi Hain Mainay, Socha Aik Saath Share Ker Doon..

(1)

Ek Teray Rooth Janay Se Saari Dunya Khafa Si Lagti Hai

Jab Hon Chaaron Taraf Ye Sannatay Dil Ki Dharkan Sada Si Lagti Hai

Her Samay Jab Azaab Utrain Tou Zindagi Khud Qaza Si Lagti Hai

Aise Lamhay Pe Teray Honton Per Muskurahat Duaa Si Lagti Hai

Sochna Tum Ko, Tum Ko Sochtay Rehna Ye Aadat Bhi Dil-Ruba Si Lagti Hai

Teri Aankhon Main Saadgi Itni Kion Tuu Sab Se Juda Si Lagti Hai

(2)

Teray Honton Pe Itni Khamoshi Aur Aankhon Main Ek Sada Si Lagti Hai

Kion Tuu Hans Bol Ke Nahi Milti Kion Tuu Mujh Se Khafa Si Lagti Hai

Teri Aankhain Sada Ki Qaatil Hain Inn Main Her Damm Qaza Si Lagti Hai

Teray Aanchal Ke Saa-ay Main Bethoon Iss Khushboo, Hina Si Lagti Hai

Teray Aanay Se Phool Khiltay Hain Kitni Dilkash Fiza Si Lagti Hai

Teri Guftaar Main Hai Sheereeni Aur Lehjay Main Ek Adaa Si Lagti Hai

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

simply...................................Superb!!!!
alfaaz mein saadgee .............magar meaning mein depth...........
amazing!!!

redidentity · September 11, 2007, 7:49am

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Thanks alot sonia.. jabhi aapko parhnay kaha tha

SJ · September 11, 2007, 8:04am

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AWWW…
u r shooo shweet…

redidentity · September 11, 2007, 8:06am

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U too..

SJ · September 11, 2007, 8:13am

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hayee Allah…tumhain kaisay pata chal gaya:blush:

redidentity · September 11, 2007, 8:28am

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tum bin confirm kia.. mujhe malom tha..

SJ · September 11, 2007, 8:29am

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kya?????????
tum_bin nay...............
no way man....cant believe this!!!!

redidentity · September 11, 2007, 8:40am

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sachi :)

tahreem_saeed · September 11, 2007, 11:46am

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wah superb kafi nahi bohat achi hey Ahmer ji shaandar waqai main aap ki hein?

Shumaisa · September 11, 2007, 11:51am

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Ahem ahem.. Lagta hai barray mood mein likhi hain

P.S: V. Nicee..

redidentity · September 11, 2007, 11:53am

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Thnx Tehreem n Shumaisa.. :)

Ye Unn DIno Ki Baat Hai :)

tum_bin_1 · September 11, 2007, 12:46pm

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hain yeh kab ke baat hai …wasay Ahmer my sis knows me better
usay pata hai main usay sweet nahi keh sakte .

Anyway poems r really very nice

Amal · September 11, 2007, 2:37pm

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So very touching Ahmer :k: … Bohat zabardast … keep it up and keep it sharing