Tumse Intehaa Pyaar hai...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Ek surat hai, jiska meri aankhon ko intezaar rehta hai
ek muskurahat hai jiske liye dil yeh beyqaraar rehta hai
Aao kajol ki tarah palkon per behta duun
aao tumhe apne bholay pyaar mein nehladuun
apne honto ko tumharey gaalon pe sama duun
apni bahon mein tumharey jism ko basalun
lao tum apna chehra zara mere kareeb
hojaon mein bhi khubsurti ke nazdeeq,
zindagi ka tum hissa to nahi
per mere liye tum zindagi hi sahi
puucho to batadun raaz saare apne
ke kaun sajata hai her raat mere sapne
dil padaish pe kiya, dhadka to ab hai
saans hai ya na, tum ho to sab hai
jaise roshni ne andheron mein rung dala
aisey tumharey pyaar ne mujhe badal dala
laila majnuu to sub purani baatein hain
hum to tumhe usse ziada chahte hain
chahe thora hi sahi tumharey pyaar per marte hain
sacha ho ya nahi, tumharey liye jannat bhi inkaar kerte hain
dil hamesha ke liye apnana chahta hai tumhe
judai se yeh dil ghabrata hai mujhe
her pal meri duaaen tumko yaad kerti hain
Mera zameer, meri soch tum per hi perti hai

Tumhare liye…
yeh dil yeh jaan
yeh jism yeh imaan
mera sub beyqaraar hai…

haan…
mujhe tumse intehaa pyaar hai.

ook ok so its not that good :S per constructive critisicm is most welcome.
Thanks

SAlam
Cres.

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Nice.. :flower1:…

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:k: beautiful

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Re: Tumse Intehaa Pyaar hai...

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*Originally posted by Crescent_: *
Ek surat hai, jiska meri aankhon ko intezaar rehta hai
ek muskurahat hai jiske liye dil yeh beyqaraar rehta hai
Aao kajol ki tarah palkon per behta duun
aao tumhe apne bholay pyaar mein nehladuun
apne honto ko tumharey gaalon pe sama duun
apni bahon mein tumharey jism ko basalun
lao tum apna chehra zara mere kareeb
hojaon mein bhi khubsurti ke nazdeeq,
zindagi ka tum hissa to nahi
per mere liye tum zindagi hi sahi
puucho to batadun raaz saare apne
ke kaun sajata hai her raat mere sapne
dil padaish pe kiya, dhadka to ab hai
saans hai ya na, tum ho to sab hai
jaise roshni ne andheron mein rung dala
aisey tumharey pyaar ne mujhe badal dala
laila majnuu to sub purani baatein hain
hum to tumhe usse ziada chahte hain
chahe thora hi sahi tumharey pyaar per marte hain
sacha ho ya nahi, tumharey liye jannat bhi inkaar kerte hain
dil hamesha ke liye apnana chahta hai tumhe
judai se yeh dil ghabrata hai mujhe
her pal meri duaaen tumko yaad kerti hain
Mera zameer, meri soch tum per hi perti hai

Tumhare liye...
yeh dil yeh jaan
yeh jism yeh imaan
mera sub beyqaraar hai...

haan...
mujhe tumse intehaa pyaar hai.

ook ok so its not that good :S per constructive critisicm is most welcome.
Thanks

SAlam
Cres.
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BohaT Khoob Jee abhi tu aap ne sharwaat ki hai agge dekhte hain kiya kiya hota hai jee wase aap nee bohat achi poetry likhi hai :)

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aila majnuu to sub purani baatein hain
hum to tumhe usse ziada chahte hain

that was beautiful...
its really nice to see men expressing their feelings in ghazals...

:--p ek taraf se larki ka pata bhi nahe aur dosre taraf se pata bhi hai ... very cute... "Andeekhi anjajani par kuch jani pehchani"

kyo? *wink

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beautiful...really good.

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Nice!

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ohhhhhhhhhhh my Allah... i love u urrrrr poem yaar.. u are great.. is soo nice.. MASHALLAH... good job...

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Thanks, I didn’t know it was that good! just wrote down whatever came to mind…!,

Cres.

btw usko bhi pasand aayi bohut :blush: :blush: :wink:

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good one