SuraJ
January 29, 2004, 12:57pm
1
**Tumhi tu ho ik Tumhi tu ho **
sard ratoon key pichley pehar
Kabhi chupkey sey kabhi holey sey
meri behki behki sochon mein
piyaar ka deep jalatey ho
**Tumhi tu ho ik Tumhi tu ho **
Jab Gham key andheerey barh jain
jab shaam_e_hijar bhi tan aye
our Wehshat_e_gham sulgaye mujhey
is dard sey tum bhi jaltey ho
**Tumhi tu ho ik Tumhi tu ho **
Kis Rah mein huwa yeh Rabt_e_dil
kis tour sey main tumheen chahoon sada
yeh sitam sabhi key our main Tanha
aisey mein mujhey Behlaatey ho
**Tumhi tu ho ik Tumhi tu ho **
In ujri ujri bastiyoon sey
is Vehshat sey, veerani sey
Jab jism nah laye taab kaheen
Din raat mujhey sehlaatey ho
**Tumhi tu ho ik Tumhi tu ho **
Thehroo !! nah jao abhi sey tum
hai dil mein ik khalish abhi
yeh dard mitey tu phir jana
jo khushboo ban key behkaatey ho
**Tumhi tu ho ik Tumhi tu ho **
dil mera ho jab nalaan bahut
main rothoon, ho jaon khafa bahut
tum sisak key Aheen bhartey ho
phir zabt_e_ada sikhlaatey ho
**Tumhi tu ho ik Tumhi tu ho **
hmmm very nice jee bohat khoob zabardast jee :)
Bohat khoob suraJ, well done zaberdast geet hey yeh tu. :k:
SuraJ
January 29, 2004, 1:16pm
5
thank u jee
waisey mainey tu poem likhi yeh geet kaisey ban giya
uffffffffffffff hheheheh shaid yeh aik song hou aap to buddu hou na suraj jee :D and thank kehne ki zarorat nehi jee :)
now u compose the music for suraj n thn hopefully somebody can sing it for us …
suraj : :k:
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now u compose the music for suraj n thn hopefully somebody can sing it for us :D ...
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jee nayee us ney sirf kissi aik key liye likha hay :p
pehley tum aapis mein decide ker lo kiss ko chahyee :D
SuraJ
January 29, 2004, 1:50pm
10
main
main raat 3 baje tak likhta raha yeh and u said its songggg :@
tumheen main dekh lon ga and tum ab key abd meri poem visit nahi karo gi.
ok ?
SuraJ
January 29, 2004, 1:58pm
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thank u nickless 4 liking
swera should compose the music mrs m u have to sing it
Swera
January 29, 2004, 2:20pm
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*Originally posted by SuraJ: *
thank u very much
raaz ki baat hai :)
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u welcome:)
kitnai raaz ki?:-|
SuraJ
January 29, 2004, 2:25pm
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*Originally posted by Swera: *
u welcome:)
kitnai raaz ki?:-|
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hmmmm raaz tu raaz hota hai chota ho ya bara :)
*Originally posted by SuraJ: *
main
main raat 3 baje tak likhta raha yeh and u said its songggg :@
tumheen main dekh lon ga and tum ab key abd meri poem visit nahi karo gi.
ok ?
aap to burra maan gay hain jee aggar aap ko burra laga to sorry jee haan muje dekh lena jee magar shaid khwaabon main jee aur main aap ki poem kion nehi visit karun gi ? karun gi aur wo bhi rozana samje Mr Suraj