..::Tumhen Janay ki jaldi thi::..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

maya7492 June 10, 2011, 10:29am 1

Tumhain janay ki jaldi thi…
So apni jald baazi main
Tum apnay lams ki kirnain..
Nazar k zaviye..
poaron ki shamain
Mere seene main bharakta chhor aye ho…
Wahan takiye k neechay
Kuch sunehray rung ki tooti hui saansain
Kisi nozayeda khushbu k taza khuwabchay
Bistar ki shiknon main giray kuch khoobru lamhay
Dressing room main hanger se latki aik sud rangi hansi ko
Bas achanak hi pas-e-parda latakta chhor aye ho
Tumhain janay ki jaldi thi ab aisa hay k jab bhi
Be-khayali main sahi..!
lekin
kabhi jo is taraf niklo
To itna yaad rakhna…!!
Ghar ki chaabi saddar darwazay k bayen hath par
Aik khoal main rakhi milay gi

Or tumhain maaloom hay
kapron ki almaari hamesha se khuli hay
safe ki chaabi to tum ne khud hi gumm ki thi
So woh tab se khula hay or us main kuch
Tumhari choorian ’
aik aadh angoothi or un k beech
Kuch zard lamhay
or un lamhon ki girhon main bandhi kuch lams ki kirnain
Nazar k zaviye ’
poaron ki shamain
or sunehray rung ki tooti hui
Saansain milain gi
Or woh sab kuch jo mera or tumhara
Mushtarka sa ek asasa hay
Simat paye to le jana…!!!
k abb
Mujhay janay ki jaldi hay…!!!
Ayyub Khawar

jiia June 10, 2011, 11:01am 2

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kia apne IJAZAT /hindi film ka song suna hi

MERA KUCH SAMAN TOMARE PAS PARA HI VO BHIJVAJVA DO

_Masoom_Muskaan June 10, 2011, 1:11pm 3

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nice

Shazia_Arif June 10, 2011, 2:57pm 4

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a bit long but full of emotions...bohat alaa.

pktun June 12, 2011, 1:14am 5

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nysh :k:

maya7492 June 12, 2011, 3:07pm 6

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thanx

Amarbail June 12, 2011, 3:46pm 7

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Lovely … :k:

Sannan June 13, 2011, 5:45am 8

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nice to see u after long time with cool poem

Sajalina June 13, 2011, 7:09am 9

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I came across this nazam many many years ago, can't even remember how long it's been. Nice read once again and made a lot more sense this time.

punjabi_kuri_1 June 13, 2011, 12:58pm 10

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:k:

maya7492 June 13, 2011, 3:03pm 11

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thank you…

thanks:)

maya7492 June 13, 2011, 3:04pm 12

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same here so i posted.....

babri June 13, 2011, 6:45pm 13

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Nice.

sarmad786 June 15, 2011, 8:52pm 14

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maya7492:

Tumhain janay ki jaldi thi.... So apni jald baazi main Tum apnay lams ki kirnain.. Nazar k zaviye.. poaron ki shamain Mere seene main bharakta chhor aye ho... Wahan takiye k neechay Kuch sunehray rung ki tooti hui saansain Kisi nozayeda khushbu k taza khuwabchay Bistar ki shiknon main giray kuch khoobru lamhay Dressing room main hanger se latki aik sud rangi hansi ko Bas achanak hi pas-e-parda latakta chhor aye ho Tumhain janay ki jaldi thi ab aisa hay k jab bhi Be-khayali main sahi..! lekin kabhi jo is taraf niklo To itna yaad rakhna...!! Ghar ki chaabi saddar darwazay k bayen hath par Aik khoal main rakhi milay gi

Or tumhain maaloom hay kapron ki almaari hamesha se khuli hay safe ki chaabi to tum ne khud hi gumm ki thi So woh tab se khula hay or us main kuch Tumhari choorian ' aik aadh angoothi or un k beech Kuch zard lamhay or un lamhon ki girhon main bandhi kuch lams ki kirnain Nazar k zaviye ' poaron ki shamain or sunehray rung ki tooti hui Saansain milain gi Or woh sab kuch jo mera or tumhara Mushtarka sa ek asasa hay Simat paye to le jana.........................................!!!! k abb Mujhay janay ki jaldi hay......!!! Ayyub Khawar

***bicharne say zara pehle
tumhe bhi soch laina chahiye tha
k yun chahat ko thukraya nhi krte
k yun beetay dino ko bhulana acha nhi hota
k yun anjan ban ker jeena
hamre liye mumkin nhi ho ga
tmhe b soch laina chahyie tha

k woh baatien jo hum ker chukay hain
ab woh kabhi wapis nhi ayiee gi
k woh lamhey jo hum ek dusray mai jee chukay hain
phir kabhi zinda nhi hoon gay
bicharne say zara pehle

tumhe b soch laina chahyie tha ... ***:( :( :(

LP June 15, 2011, 8:53pm 15

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Innocent_Smile June 16, 2011, 1:34pm 16

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maya7492:

Tumhain janay ki jaldi thi…
So apni jald baazi main
Tum apnay lams ki kirnain..
Nazar k zaviye..
poaron ki shamain
Mere seene main bharakta chhor aye ho…
Wahan takiye k neechay
Kuch sunehray rung ki tooti hui saansain
Kisi nozayeda khushbu k taza khuwabchay
Bistar ki shiknon main giray kuch khoobru lamhay
Dressing room main hanger se latki aik sud rangi hansi ko
Bas achanak hi pas-e-parda latakta chhor aye ho
Tumhain janay ki jaldi thi ab aisa hay k jab bhi
Be-khayali main sahi..!
lekin
kabhi jo is taraf niklo
To itna yaad rakhna…!!
Ghar ki chaabi saddar darwazay k bayen hath par
Aik khoal main rakhi milay gi

Or tumhain maaloom hay
kapron ki almaari hamesha se khuli hay
safe ki chaabi to tum ne khud hi gumm ki thi
So woh tab se khula hay or us main kuch
Tumhari choorian ’
aik aadh angoothi or un k beech
Kuch zard lamhay
or un lamhon ki girhon main bandhi kuch lams ki kirnain
Nazar k zaviye ’
poaron ki shamain
or sunehray rung ki tooti hui
Saansain milain gi
Or woh sab kuch jo mera or tumhara
Mushtarka sa ek asasa hay
Simat paye to le jana…!!!
k abb
Mujhay janay ki jaldi hay…!!!
Ayyub Khawar

main bas itna hi keh sakti hon is ka har lafz boht qeemti hai…

maya7492 June 19, 2011, 2:12pm 17

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bicharne say zara pehle
tumhe b soch laina chahyie tha ...
very very nice

maya7492 June 19, 2011, 2:13pm 18

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I agree…