Tumhein yaad ki banhoon mein liye

chodhry · July 16, 2003, 5:28pm

Tum Aaye, chaley bhi gye
apney peechey,
aik achi se mulaqat ka naqash
choor gye

ab ham beithey
tumhari batoon key aqas sey
kahien door sey aati
tumhaari khushbu key lams sey

tumhein yaad ki banhoon mein liye
tumhaari qurbat ka ehsaas jagga rhey hein
apna jee behla rhey hein…

chodhry

thanks for your time and comments

Capricorn · July 16, 2003, 5:30pm

Nice one :k:

system · July 16, 2003, 9:51pm

Zakhmi_Umar · July 17, 2003, 3:56am

Re: Tumhein yaad ki banhoon mein liye

wow nice one Chodhry sb/sahiba buhat acha likha hai keep it up :k:
thanks for sharing

Black_Mamba · July 17, 2003, 6:42am

:k: Keep it up

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 17, 2003, 12:48pm

Nice, keep it up.

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 17, 2003, 1:11pm

bohat achay, :k: keep it up

Amal · July 17, 2003, 1:42pm

Very nice chodhry:k:…bohat achi nazm hey.

system · July 17, 2003, 4:52pm

wow, bohat achi nazm hai :k::k:
keep it up..

Dilsay · July 17, 2003, 6:45pm

Masha Allah

Golden_Scorpion · July 18, 2003, 7:11am

Its Nice Chodhry... Keep it Up ... :biggthumb

chodhry · July 18, 2003, 1:02pm

Re: Re: Tumhein yaad ki banhoon mein liye

thanks umer and its Chodhry Sahib… i hope tht wont make any diff giving comments…hehehe

chodhry · July 18, 2003, 1:06pm

thankyou everybody, i am getting a good deal of encouragement over here. thank you so much.

system · December 30, 2004, 9:33pm

*almost fainting… *

You’re such a good writer… I think I am going to become a fan of you :halo: