Tumhein mae ne khud kho diya hai...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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* kaash aay kash mae ik lamha tehr jaata aur is lamha ko toul de ker abad banata tumhein apni banhon mein laita ya phir dhool bun ker bikher jata raston mein tere kissi tour tu mae tere saath rehta kahein dhool bun ker rastoon mein bichta kahein khwaab bun ker aankhoon mein basta kahein phool bun ker laboon pe chitakta tumhein dhoondh lata ghanay khwabon k junglon se mgr mae ne phir kho diya hai tumhein umer bhur k liye haan tumhein mae ne khud kho diya hai tumhare liye...*sigh*
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i hate this kaash :hoonh:

kaash, kaash, kaash, it never comes ture :bummer:

Lovely poem… :k:

kiddoooo :hehe:

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kash tum ye na likhte :hoonh:

thankx for liking :snooty:

aur khud ho ge kiddo :smash:

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lol, :smiley:
kabhi baghair hoonh k bhi kaam chala liya karo.. :hoonh:

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nice poem HH, kahan sey maari?? ;):smiley:

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beautiful:k:

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Wah… bahut khoob…
The topic was also wonderful of your thread … keep it up :k:

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wah :k: buhat khoob

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Kaaash tum ney ussey khud na choorra hotaaa...hehehe

bohat achi poem heyyyyy...thanks for sharing

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Kahan aa k rukay thay rastay,kahan morh tha usay bhool ja
woh jo mil gaya usay yaad rekh,jo nehi mila usay bhool ja

:(

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *
Kaaash tum ney ussey khud na choorra hotaaa...hehehe

bohat achi poem heyyyyy...thanks for sharing
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mae ne jaan bhoj ker nahi khoya .... :D

thanks for liking anyways :)

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Nice shair :k:

waisay dont be sad uncle jee… :smiley:

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ta’reef ka aur pasand kerne ka shukriya :~)

viv us kahani se mari thee jo tum ne nahi parhi :stuck_out_tongue:

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Uncle kis ko bolaaaaaaaa:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

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oh mera mutlab tha aunty jee :smiley:

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Wah..... amazing

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thanks for liking taj :~)