tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

system March 20, 2005, 6:33pm 1

tumhein itna batana hai
keh chaahaey kuch bhi ho jaey
bohat dushwaar rustaa ho
bohat gehra undhaira ho
hum apna dil jalaaein gay
tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

tumhein itna bataana hai
tumhaaree aankh me hilkorte
sab ashk chun lein gay
hum apni zaat mein jaanaN
tere sab gham ssambhaalein gay
tujhe khushiyo se bhar dein gay
dhanak rango me dhaalein gay
tumhein ronay nahee dein gay

tumhein itna bataaana hai
keh jab tak saans baaqee hai
tumhaara naam dharkan hai
nigaahoN me diya ban ker
tumhaaree yaad roshan hai
jahaaN ke is jhamelay me
tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

tumhein itna bataaana hai
kabhi tanhaai aur gehree udaasi gar sataaey
aur ghabra ker jo tum humko pukaaro gay
yaqeeN rakhna k sab kuch chhore tere paas aein gay
bharee dunya me hum tanha
tumhein honay nahee dein gay
tumhein itna bataana hai

Amal March 20, 2005, 9:13pm 2

Re: tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

That’s so beautifully done Ahsan :k: … I like the rhythm of your poem…
Bohat khoob likha hey aap ney…Thanx for sharing with us

system March 21, 2005, 7:20pm 3

Re: tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

thanks for the appreciation

Golden_Scorpion_1 March 22, 2005, 4:05am 4

Re: tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

Mashallah… Very Well Written… Tnx for Sharing…

system March 22, 2005, 7:52am 5

Re: tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

thanks for the appreciation aap loago ki tareef mujhe behtar se behtar likhne ka hosla bakhshay gi

Golden_Scorpion_1 March 22, 2005, 11:56am 6

Re: tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

And.. Jan hum Tanqeed ke mood maiN hongay tou phir Wo bhi sunni paRegi :D

~Paki*Pride*786~ 5k~

system March 22, 2005, 3:03pm 7

Re: tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

tanqeed ka bhi khair maqdam kia jaey ga

GuL-e-Tasbeeh March 22, 2005, 9:48pm 8

Re: tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

A very beautiful poem ahsan,hope to see more from your diary:-) and thanks for sharing

system March 24, 2005, 8:10am 9

Re: tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

shukriya !!
ji haan jald hi mazeed kalaam share keroon ga … i hope aap ko pasand aae ga

Dilsay April 3, 2005, 11:53pm 10

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tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

hum nay behi ya he kaha tha apni kamzoori say kho diya...

Khush rahoo

system April 4, 2005, 3:07am 11

Re: tumhein khonay nahee dein gay

aur humein qismat aur waqt ne moqa nai dia…