TumheiN kahaa tha na hum ye dil-lagi nahi hey

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Ye be-khudi hey hum’dum be-chaargi nahi hey
tumheiN kahaa tha na hum ye dil-lagi nahi hey

tum laotna bhi chaho to unhi bastiyoN meiN ja ke
tumheiN lagey ga ke hum bin koi zindagi nahi hey

kya ramz hey ye aakhir tum khud sey pooch lo na
kiuN ye aag chaahatoN ki ab tak bujhi nahi hey!

ye raastey wafa ke yahaaN har safar hey aagey
khud deikh lo kaheeN sey koi waapsi nahi hey

yuNhi haath thaam rakho ke hey har taraf andhera
abhi sehan meiN aasmaaN ke koi kiran jagi nahi hey
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By: Amal

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Ye be-khudi hey hum’dum be-chaargi nahi hey
tumheiN kahaa tha na hum ye dil-lagi nahi hey
:lajawab:

Wrestling!!!
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''ney'' likhna bhool gaey hein ya .... Very nice ,lekin iss sey hazaar darja behtreen ghazals aap likh chukey heiN uss ke muqabaley mein ye waali theekh hi hey:-)

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it is quite impressive...

do u people
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boht ache ghazal hei bhae:)

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meray ko tu shoro se he pata tha ye dillagi he hai
All over very nice Aymal , meRay ko tu achi nahi b likhi ho gi wo b spurb lagay ghi :)…haan taReef k leay kuch lufz mil he gaey keoN? :stuck_out_tongue:

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Darling
I’m in rapture, I’m not helpless
I told you earlier
My love is real

If you want to return to
those dwellings you like,
you’ll without me
find no life there

What parable is here
you ask yourself
for love-fires of ardent
lovers are still rising in flames

These’re the roads of faithfuls
they’re on a long journey
see it for yourself
the roads don’t bend back

just for nothing
you’re holding yourself in darkness
not a ray of sun has
yet entered the garden

-tr. Ravi Kopra
http://whitewings.sulekha.com/blog/post/2007/06/i-m-in-rapture-i-m-not-helpless.htm

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awesome creation..................
great work Amal..................

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Bhai ke Ghazalzzz samajh aa jatee hain kya ?:hmmm:

Bohat ajeeb baat hai …hain na ??

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nehe ateyn wese he lekah tah :pagli:

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wah wah sahib... kaya kehnay hain
aur teesray shair ki to kaya baat hai...

waisy aakhri misray kay wazan main kuch problem lagti hai

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Re: TumheiN kahaa tha na hum ye dil-lagi nahi hey

It's not selfishness, nor is it helplessness
I had told I wasn't fooling with you in love

Should you wish to go back to those dwellings
You'll see you have no life there without me

to be continued...

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beautiful..............

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kashmakash youn zindage main aatee rahee hain
kay lagta hai ye kasauti bhi aakheri nahi hai
by fizza

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:halo:

mane pahly kyu nah parhi ye :rolleyes:

khair never too late

beautifull loved it amal :k:quote nahi karahi cuz the whole ghazal is beautifulll :slight_smile:

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very nice

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No words to say how nice this is... Khush rahoo

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:k:

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ye raastey wafa ke yahaaN har safar hey aagey
khud deikh lo kaheeN sey koi waapsi nahi hey

very nice poem. thanks or sharing, Amal.

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bohot achi hai :)