Pramod, koshish achi hey lekin ghazal meiN bilkul jaan nahi hey. Bhai meri baat ka bura na maanna, meiN baaqi logoN ki tarhaN is ki tareef kar ke aap ko is ghalat-fehmi meiN nahi rakhna chahata ke you have done a great job. I want you to know exact;u what are you doing. Anyhow, lagta hey aap ki aek class leni parrey gi, if you really want me to share with you what I know about writing ghazals :)
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**Pramod,* koshish achi hey lekin ghazal meiN bilkul jaan nahi hey. Bhai meri baat ka bura na maanna, meiN baaqi logoN ki tarhaN is ki tareef kar ke aap ko is ghalat-fehmi meiN nahi rakhna chahata ke you have done a great job. I want you to know exact;u what are you doing. Anyhow, lagta hey aap ki aek class leni parrey gi, if you really want me to share with you what I know about writing ghazals :)
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Amal sahab, es forum pe to ham hamesha se aap ke fan rahein haiN..aap ne hamein sikhaane ke qaabil samjha, es se khushii ke kya baat ho sakti hai mere liye...bataaeye class kahaan se shuru kare GURU jii....I m ready....
es apnepan ke liye bahot hi shukraguzaar hoon aap ka....
[QUOTE] Originally posted by Amal: *
**Pramod,* koshish achi hey lekin ghazal meiN bilkul jaan nahi hey. Bhai meri baat ka bura na maanna, meiN baaqi logoN ki tarhaN is ki tareef kar ke aap ko is ghalat-fehmi meiN nahi rakhna chahata ke you have done a great job. I want you to know exact;u what are you doing. Anyhow, lagta hey aap ki aek class leni parrey gi, if you really want me to share with you what I know about writing ghazals :)
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hmmmm
Amal!
shayri ko choorain, can u see how simply ayk bunday nay apni feelings ka azhaar keya????
though, khuch shair 100% wazan main nahi hain, but still a few like this
ye chaman meri wafaa ka hai, ese mousamoN kii khu nahiN
jo waqt kaa rahe muntazir, oon bahaaroN ko rok lo
so over all , i thinkkkk... its ok :)
but it will be good Parmod, uger Amal aap ko ki class lain tu... pahlay sirf Amal ki poetry we all like then we will have two persons , i hope.... :)
Amal sahab, es forum pe to ham hamesha se aap ke fan rahein haiN..aap ne hamein sikhaane ke qaabil samjha, es se khushii ke kya baat ho sakti hai mere liye...bataaeye class kahaan se shuru kare GURU jii....I m ready....
es apnepan ke liye bahot hi shukraguzaar hoon aap ka....
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Thanx for taking it in good part:) I am very much aware of my worth - that I am no authority on the subject. But by carefully examining myself, I really feel that I can impart a couple of tips to you. It's nice that you are willing to learn. So you have already completed your first lesson successfuly:)
Amjad bhai ki baat bhi durust hey. At least you have a style to put your thougts on the paper. Words are also there, what I want to do is to be of some help in putting those words a little more better - just a little :) Anyhow, I will contact you soon :)
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