ikk aqeedat rahi hum ko
tumhare naam se
ikk ronaq rahi dil main
tumhare naam se
main ddolti si nayya
tum sagar ka ikk kinara
woh ter gai bhanwer main
tumhare naam se
kaali andheri raat
phir wehshatain phelati
ikk timtimaya tara
tumhare naam se
kuch aansoo manchale se
aankhon se lurrahk gaye
inn anso-on ko dharas
tumhare naam se
dil jiss pe attak gaya
woh dastaan adhuri
wabasta rahi her pall
tumhare naam se…
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Shazia i must say this is one of your very very heat touching poem
… Aik Tasalusul hay jo suru say lay kar Akhar tuk Qari ka Irtikaaz totnay naheen daita hay …
MashaAllah aap k kallam mein nikhaar aata ja raha hay …
Dheroon mubarak ittni achi nazam likhnay par
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bht khoob
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thank u so much Sannaan & punjabi kurri.
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wah wah
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really cool poetry
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thank u udaas n Maha.
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nicee one
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hummm
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thanx Rabzz n azad.
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koi bat nahi
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NICE
Ab to ghabara ke ye kahte hin ke mar jaayenge
Mar ke bhe chain na paayaa to kidhar jaayenge
tum ne Thaharaai agar Gair ke ghar jaane ki
to iraade yahaaN kuchh aur Thahar jaayenge
ham nahin vo jo karen Khuun kaa daavaa tujh par
balqi puuchhegaa Khudaa bhi to mukar jaayenge
aag dozaKh ki bhi ho jaayegi paani paani
jab ye aasi arq-e-sharm se tar jaayenge
[dozakh=hell; aasi=sinner; arq=sweat]
sholaa-e-aah ko bijali ki tarah chamakaauuN
par mujhe Dar hai, ki vo dekh kar Dar jaayenge
laaye jo mast hain turbat pe gulaabi aaNkhen
aur agar kuchh nahin, do phuul to dhar jaayenge
nahin paayegaa nishaaN koi hamaaraa hargiz
ham jahaaN se ravish-e-tir-e-nazar jaaynge
[ravish-e-tir-e-nazar=like an arrow thrown from the eye=a fleeting glance]
pahuN-chen ge rahaguzar-e-yaar talak ham kyuuN kar
pahale jab tak na do aalam se guzar jaayenge
‘Zauq’ jo madarase ke bigaDe hue hain mullaah
unako maiKhaane men le aao saNvar jaayenge
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Amna this is awesome leekan agar aap intikhab mein alag say share karaiN gi to ziyada loog lutaf undooz hoon ga ![]()
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thanx sour soul & Amna.
its jst a honour 4 me Amna that u wrote such a beautiful poetry in my reply but Sannaan is also right that if u wud post it in intikhab then more ppl cud enjoy but still thankful to u.
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Yeh din yun hi guzar jayengay
Shayed hum dost yun hi bichar jayengay
Naraz na aap hamari sharartoon se hona
Yeh to woh pal hain jokal yaad ayengay...
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LKK very true
yaar rulla dia tum nay to ![]()
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nice 1 LK.
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:aliyish: