.. tumhare be-wafaee, kaj-adaee ke qasam tumko ..

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 11, 2005, 1:15am

judaee denay walay tum say umeed-e-wafa kesay
taluq tot jayay jub
mohabbat roht jayay jub
to phir rasm-e-duaa kesay
milan ke iltaja kesay
banwar ke dobe kisthe pay sahil ke tamna kia
ukhray sans hoon to zindage ke arzo bhi kia
jo manzil koh chuke ho uske phir say justajo bhi kion
raz-e-dost per acha sar-e-tasleem khaam karna
*sisknay say yahee behtar hai kay na-umeed he marna *
magar dil nay kis wastay say tumehin yaad rakha hai
tumehin kion shehar mein aaj tak abad rakha hai
judae denay walay ashianay ke qism tumko
tumhare be-wafaee, kaj-e-adaee ke qasam tumko
mujhe itna bata deta
wafa ke chahto’n ke mashalae’n kesay puhjatay hain
nishaan kesay mita-tay hain
bohlana ho jinhein unhein kesay bohlatay hain ..

Aryaan · March 11, 2005, 6:06am

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Bohat khoob Ghazal …:k:

system · March 11, 2005, 3:58pm

Re: .. tumhare be-wafaee, kaj-adaee ke qasam tumko ..

NishaaN kaisey miTaatey haiN
Bhoolana ho jinheiN, unheiN kaisey bhoolatey haiN

Bahut achi nazm hai ghazal :-)

X_Communist · March 11, 2005, 4:28pm

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nice

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 12, 2005, 1:32am

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thankew everyone .. :-) ..

shoaib_akhter · March 12, 2005, 6:59am

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bohat khoab :k:

reet · March 12, 2005, 12:01pm

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Bhoolana ho jinheiN, unheiN kaisey bhoolatey haiN

bahot khoob......** Ghazal **

NikamiJano · March 12, 2005, 3:16pm

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nice one gkk..:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 15, 2005, 2:12am

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thankew everyone .. :-) ..

Amal · March 15, 2005, 8:12pm

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ghazal kisi ke bohat achi nazm hey:k:…thanx for sharing

dignity · March 16, 2005, 6:36am

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wah!!! bohat khoob

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 16, 2005, 12:07pm

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Buhat khoob Gkk:-)

Mindless · March 17, 2005, 4:08pm

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tumhare be-wafaee, kaj-e-adaee ke qasam tumko
mujhe itna bata deta
wafa ke chahto’n ke mashalae’n kesay puhjatay hain
nishaan kesay mita-tay hain
bohlana ho jinhein unhein kesay bohlatay hain ..

Excellent :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 17, 2005, 7:29pm

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thankew everyone .. :-) ..