TUMHARAY HIJR KI SHAMAIN....

tumharay hijr ki shamain
bari pur kaif hain jana
in shamon main ab yeh dil
kabhi tanha nahi hota
tumhari yaad k jugno
issay ab shaad rakhtay hain
tumharay lams kay mausum
yahan din raat rehtay hain
tumharay hath ki khushbo
abhi bhi raqs karti hai
meray veeran hathon par
woh sham bhi aksar ati hai
jab rukhsat mangi thi tumnay
woh geet jo tum ko azbar thay
ab merey lab pay rehtay hain

Tum ko aisa lagta hai kia?
hijr zada dil hasta hai kia?
jhotay bahanay jhotay daway
jhooti batain likhta hon
such to yeh jan e jana
bikhray moti sapno k main
aj bhi baitha chunta hon
tumhari yaad k jugnoo
mujhay bay had rulatay hain
tumharay lams k mausum
mujhay shab bhar jagatay hain
woh shaam to ati hai lekin
ab mujh pay hasti rehti hai
aur geet tumharay gaa kar woh
bass mujh ko dasti rehti hai
baykal din aur tanha ratain
dil pay naqsh hain sari batain

lekin jana ghum na karna
ankhain apni num na karna
MAIN PHIR BHI ABAAD BUHAT HON
HIJR MAIN TEREY SHAAD BUHAT HON

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dead soul,
very good sketch of a non-comittal stuck hood. the protagonist can't step forward and say it bravely, but knows that without saying, either it is absolute loneliness as an illusion of comfortable distance or a life long distancing that will be ever increasing and decreasing at the same time. non-speakability is a terrible strategy in case of true regard.
very few non-sentimentalists and true realizants can word this particular feeling of nostalgic-regret, if i read it correctly, in the way you have worded it.
thanks for sharing.

best,
Dushwari

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very nice stuff :) as always

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yes dushwari u got it absolutly rite
and thx 4 detailed view

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thx bheegi

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Bohat umdaa Nazam kahee hai app nay Deadsoul:)

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beautiful..

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thx sonia

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thx red

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Itna dard acha nahi hay... haan nazam buhat achi hay lekin dard mainay kaha na achee chiz nahi.

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Beautiful. Im just spell bound. The flow and the lyricism.... You ARE a poet :)

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achi koshish kay

Re: TUMHARAY HIJR KI SHAMAIN....

ji han fara ji dard waqi achi cheez nahi
issi lye koi bhi dard ko nahi rakhta
kisi aur ko dejata hai

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thx v much

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thx

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khoob hai dead ji

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Buhut khoob,
aaj to ap ne Kufar dha dya :)
thanks for sharing

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thx jawad

Re: TUMHARAY HIJR KI SHAMAIN....

bhut zabrdsast
buhat aalaa

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thx