Tumharay Bin............

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Tumharay Bin…

Bin Teray Guzarnay Walay
Har ek Lamhay Ki Chout Kha Kar
Mein Rezaa Rezaa Bikhar gaya Hon
Mujhay Khabar Bhi Na Honay Pae
Mein Jetay Je He Mar Gaya hon

Hope U Will Like It…

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Re: Tumharay Bin............

its nice

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:biggthumb NICE…
:desimunda: keep it up
:sunnyboy: thanks for shairing
:clap: bohat khoob

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Very Nice sonia_jee.. :bb:

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Re: Tumharay Bin............

thanx Takish for ur appreciation.........:)

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Thanx Alot…

:slight_smile:

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Thanx Ahmer…:slight_smile:

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Re: Tumharay Bin............

short
smple
beautiful
nazm ki khobsorti yehi hoti hai k uss me rawani ho kahin pay rabt na totay
and i think its ur 1st attmpt
keep writing

choose persons 4 ur eidi
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Re: Tumharay Bin............

It is simple and lovely,,oh wow its ur own,,i just saw it,,really nice..

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Fabulously done **soniaa_jee **:k: All the technical musts are very much there. Kahaani bhi hey aur rawaani bhi. Compact and to the point :k: Thanx for sharing it with us and we hope that you will share with us more from your work :slight_smile:

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wah ,buhat achi nazm likhi hey soniaa, hope to c more from your work, thanks for sharing :-)

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**Agreed. Totally. **

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it is telling us the whole story of a lonely man who just simply wish for togatherness !

quite touchy but its awsome ~ Nice effort sonia may ALLAH give u the power of writting ~ Amin ~
siD

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Wah!:k:

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maza nahi aya

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koi baat nahin bhai…Better luck next time…:k: