TUMHAIN NA BHOOL PAONGA....

tumhari yaad k sayay
hazaron meel lambay hain
k jitna bhi nikalta hon
main itna bach k chalta hon
mujhay yeh aa lapaktay hain
mera daman pakartay hain
meray seenay pay charhtay hain
buhat yeh shor kartay hain
kabhi ansoo rulatay hain
kabhi shab bhar jagaty hain
inhain mujh say hata do na
suno jana !
yeh sayay meelon lambay hain
inhain thora ghata do na
k ab to paon k chalay
dil tak aan pohnchay hain
tumhari yaad nay jana
meray sub zakhm nochay hain
kisi aasaib ki manind
mujahy har dum dabochay hai
kabhi chupkay say kehtay hain
batao kaisay niklo gay
bhala tum kaisay toro gay
hisar e yaad ko piyaray
magar main chup he rehta hon
k mujh ko aisa lagta hai
woh din ab anay wala hai
main apni jan ganwaon ga
mujhay q aisa lagta hai
main in say haar jaonga

tumhain na bhool paonga
tumhain na bhool paonga

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aap ko jo bhi lagta hai ghalat lagta hai
nazm achee hai very touchy :k:

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bohut khoob :k:

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thx bheegi

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thx azad

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beautiful and perfect.

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bohat khoob :k:

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thx

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thx

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rhx shab

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suno jana !
yeh sayay meelon lambay hain
inhain thora ghata do na
k ab to paon k chalay
dil tak aan pohnchay hain
tumhari yaad nay jana
meray sub zakhm nochay hain
kisi aasaib ki manind
mujahy har dum dabochay hai
kabhi chupkay say kehtay hain
batao kaisay niklo gay
bhala tum kaisay toro gay
hisar e yaad ko piyaray
magar main chup he rehta hon
k mujh ko aisa lagta hai
woh din ab anay wala hai
main apni jan ganwaon ga
mujhay q aisa lagta hai
main in say haar jaonga

tumhain na bhool paonga
tumhain na bhool paonga

Deadsoul ye wala hissa nazam ka is really Jaan leeva…!!!
bohat he Different n Bohat he Amazing…Bohat touchy…waisay aisa likhnay k liay Dard ki zarorat hotee hai…App Ko kya dard hai:faizy:
Amazing
Wondeful…


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Beautiful.. :bb:

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buhat buhat shukriya sonia
dard k baghia shayeri ka maza he nahi sonia

dard kia hota hai btayengay kisi roz
kamal ki ghazal unko sunayengay kisi roz

(sorry me nay “tum” to “un” kardiya)

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thx red

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kya faraq parta hai Deadsoul jee...................waisay kamal ka shair hai........

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ji pori ghazal hi kamaal ki hai

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ahan…
tou kab post kar rahay hain app???:faizy:

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i think post hochuki hia
han me nay fara k thread me post ki hai
ek shair main

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Itna dard acha nahi hay...

Dard ger aadmi huta tu
GareibaaN say pakar ker kehtay us say
Is terhaan kertay hain la-charoon say?
Is terhaan rehatay hain baychain dilooN kay andar?
Dil main rehna hay tu kuch theek say rehna seekhoo
Hum tumhaiN sehtay hain
Kuch tum bhee tu sehna seekhoo

Derd ger aadmi huta!!!

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:slight_smile:
Nice Sharing Sis jee:hugz:
waisay agar aisa hota tou kya he Acha Tha:(