Tumhain Main Yaad Aati Hoon?

I read this poem by Atif Saeed somewhere so thought to share it with you… reply to the frist half of the poem is modified. (Atif Saeed se mazraat ke saat)

Ajab Pagal Si Larki Hoon…
**Usay har khaat main lekhti hoon **
“Mujhay tum yaad kertay ho?
Tumhain main yaad aati hooN?”
meri baatain satati hain?
meri neendain jagati hain?
meri aankhain rulaati hain?
december ke sunehri dhoop main abb bhi teheltay ho?
kisi khamosh rustay se
koi awaaz aati hai?
Thatharti sard raatoN main
tum abb bhi chhatt pe jaatay ho?
falak ke sab sitarooN ko
meri baatain sunatay ho?
kitaboN se tumharay ishq main koi kami aai?
ya mairi yaad ke shiddat se aankhoN main nami aai?
Ajab pagal Si larki hoon
usay her khat main likhti hoon…

Jawaban wo jo lektah hai
meri masroofiyat daikho subah se shaam office main
chiragh-i-umer jalta hai
phir ous k baad duniya kee
kaee majbooriyan pao`n main bairi daal rakhti hain
mujhay bay-fikr, chahat se bharay sapnay nahin dikhtay
Tehelnay, jagnay, ronay kee mohlat hee nahin milti
sitarooN se millay arsa hua…naraz hon shayad
kitabooN se shughaf maira abhi waisay he qayem hai
farq itna parra hai ab ounahin arsay main parhta hooN
tumhain kis ne kaha pagli tumhain main yaad kerta hooN
naye logon sey milna hai naye dost bananey hain
**Esay main balah jana tumhari yaad kyun ahe **
**Mera din raat tu abb bohat masroof rehtay hain **
**Mera lafzoon ki mala main aab koi aur name rehta hai **
Mere din raat main aab, kesi aur ki sham rehti hai
**Esay main balah jana tumhari yaad kyun ahe **

ajab pagal si lerki ho, muje aab tak nahi janaa
**tum dil main ti hi kaab **
**joo tum ko main bhula dehtaa **
tum sochoon main ti hi kaab
ke sochoon se nikal dehta
**ajaab pagal si lerki ho…. **
**Samajti ho ke tumhare es ek jumlay say **
**Muje tum yaad karte ho? **
Mera dil muhabbat ka koi deya hi jala deh ga
Janna muhabbat yun nahi hoti.

Re: Tumhain Main Yaad Aati Hoon?

pagal larki hey ya jo usey pagal kah raha? ami tu kehtey jo kahta hey wo khudi hota :cb:

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lolsss muncho… :smiley:

larki bi pagal hai aur larka bi pagal hai … hahaha hows that?

wesa saram karo etni udaas poem par hansi aa rahi hai
banda tohra waah waah hi kar dehta hai etni mehnaat ki hai :snooty:

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lovely :k:

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thanksss Dania

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:)

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oohoo tu khud bhee tu kuj hint diya karain na g, mai thahra bakol ap k ‘baysaram’,
(farmeishi) waah waah waah waah; khush, mahnut wasool paaee, gudd!!!

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Simply beautiful B.H :k: bohat umda thanks alot 4 sharing !

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aab zahir hai kud lekii ho tu banda baar baar tareefain sunanah chata hai na :D

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u r welcome… thx for stopping by n leaving ur comment

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but u never mentioned the modifications, it would have been better to display the original work besides your hanky-phanky (merely a suggestion)

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aww i loved it :)

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hmmm I didn't like the ending... it would be nice if there was a shocking element of some sort. cause it was kinda too predictable.

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thanks guys....

lolss sweet if .... hhmm there was a shock element there sweety

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lol BH.. I felt like the guy was being an ass.. maybe that's why i didn't like the ending part.

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its very beautiful..

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hmmm nice modifications, me ne is ki original post ki thi, that was soopper, us me dono hi pagal the :slight_smile: is me sirf or sirf larki pagal hai :slight_smile:

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/intikhaab/294636-ajab-pagal-c-larki-hai.html

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**Ajab pagal c larki hai
Mujhay Her Khat Main Likhti Hai
Mujhe Tum Yaad Kertey Ho
Tumhe Mein Yaad Aati Houn?
Meri Batein Satati Hain?
Meri Neendein Jagati Hain?
Meri Aankhein Rulaati Hain?
December K Sunehri Dhoop Main Ab Bhi Teheltey Ho?
Kisi Khamosh Raste Se
Koye Awaaz Aati Hai?
Kapkapati Sard Raatoun Main
Tum Ab Bhi Chhat Pe Jaatey Ho?
Falak K Sab Sitaaroou Ko
Meri Baatein Sunatay Ho?
Kitaboun Se Tumhare Ishq Main Koi Kami Aayi?
Ya Meri Yaad K Shiddat Se Aankhoun Main Nami Aayi?

Ajab Pagli Si Larki Hai
Mujhay Her Khat Main Likhti Hai

Jawab Mein Uss Ko Likhta Houn
Meri Masroofiyat Dekho
Subah Se Shaam Office Main
Umar Ka Diya Jalta Hai
Phir Uss K Baad Duniya Ki
Kayi Majbooriyan Paaoun Main
Bairi Daal Rakhti Hain
Mujhe Bay-Fikr, Chahat Se Bharey Sapnay Nahi Dikhte
Tehelnay, Jagnay, Ronay Ki Mohlat He Nahin Milti
Sitarooun Se Miley Arsa Hua Naraaz Houn Shayed
Kitaboun Se Shauq Maira Abhi
Waisay He Qayem Hai
Farq Itna Para Hai
Ab Unhein Arsay Main Parhta Houn
Tumhain Kis Ne Kaha Pagli Tumhe Mein Yaad Kerta Houn
K Main Khud Ko Bhulanay Ki Musalsal Justajoo Main Houn
Tumhe Na Yaad Aaney Ki Musalsal Justajoo Main Houn
Mager Yeh Justajoo Meri Bohat Nakaam Rehti Hai
Mere Din Raat Main Ab Bhi Tumhari Shaam Rehti Hai
Mere Lafzoun Ki Her Maala Tumharay Naam Rehti Hai
Tumhe Kis Ne Kaha Pagli Tumhe Mein Yaad Kerta Houn
Purani Baat Hai Jo Log Akser Gungunatay Hain
Unhein Hum Yaad Kartay Hain Jinhen Hum Bhool Jatay Hain

Ajab Pagli Si Larki Hai

Meri Masroofiyat Dekho
Tumhe Dil Se Bhulaoun Tou Tumhari Yaad Aaye Na
Tumhe Dil Se Bhulaney Ki Mujhe Fursat Nahi Milti
Aur Iss Masroof Jeevan Me
Tumahre Khat Ka Ek Jumla
Tumhain Main Yaad Aati Houn ?
Meri Chahat Ki Shiddat Main Kami Honey Nahi Deta
Bohat Raatein Jagaata Hai Mujhay Sonay Nahi Deta
So Agli Baar Apne Khat Main Yeh Jumla Nahi Likhna

Ajab Pagli Si Larki Hai
Mujhe Phir Bhi Ye Likhti Hai
Mujhe Tum Yaad Kartey Ho?
Tumhe Main Yaad Aati Houn ?
**

BHhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... you rock gal. Its a very beautiful poem. keep it up.

I liked it very much.. may be coz... hmm k leave it laterssss :)

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O God...so lengthy but NICE......