Tumhain Dunya Ne Bakhshi Hai Jo Ruswai Mujhe De Do..

Aik Ghazal,

Dukho’n Ki Shiddatain Zakhmo’n Ki Gehrai Mujhe De Do
Maseeha Tum Sahi Izn-e-Maseehai Mujhay De Do

Tum Apni Zaat Main Khud Anjuman Ho Tum Ko Kya Gham Hai
Main Tanha Hoon Yeh Bazm-e-Zoq-e-Tanhai Mujhe De Do

Tum Apne Dil Ke Darwazay Muqaffal Shauq Se Ker Lo
Bus Apni Zaat Se Izn-e-Shanasai Mujhe De Do

Tumharay Baad Her Manzar Mujhe Be-Rung Lagta Hai
Ye Aankhain Chheen Lo, Ye Apni Beenaii Mujhe De Do

Main Saanso’n Main Samo’ Loon Ga Tumhari Her Amaanat Ko
Ye Wehshat-Naak Sanna’tay Ye Tanhai Mujhe De Do

Meri Shohrat Tumharay Kaam Aa Jaye To Haazir Hai
Tumhain Dunya Ne Bakhshi Hai Jo Ruswai Mujhe De Do

Main Shaa’ir Hoon Meray Be-Kaif Be-Taseer Lafzo’n Ko
Amar Ker Do Tum Apne Ghum Ki Ra’nai Mujhe De Do

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

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Kia jazba hai wah!:chai:

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Bohat Umdaa sharing Ahmer bro:k:

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very nice :k:

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Buhat khoob..

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aap sab ka shukria :)

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Oye Hoye ...kia baat hay

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waaaah! Ahmer sahab.....sitam ki ghazal hei. one of the best that i've read. bahot khuub.

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nice :k:

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Bohat khoob Ahmer..:k:

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nice sharing :)

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Ahmer,
mukarer.

look what i wrote in reply to the poem.

best,

Dushwari

bohet bharee heye yeye peish kush,
kushee keye ansoon iss neye rula diyey
hum wohee hein, jis ko khe ker giya heye, wohh sheks
kutch aisa jeisey meirey ehsasat is peye taaree (overwhelming; ‘irritating’ him) hein
yeye dekho, bant-a-te (gives away) chatee heye,
yeye apni ranai saree,
kisi keye wasteye jo simte thee…
wohh ubb batee (divides ) jate heye…seb dunya,
dekho, bohet baab seye khul chukeye hein,
thereye huveye, rukheye huveye seye,
Chupeye huveye seye…khvaab sareye,
Mager setcheye theye yeye tow, aur wohh jhoot semjah kiya
magr, yeye setcheye hein, abhi bhee, dekho
shayid keye wohh deikh payeye, shayid
useye ubb yakeen, ayey, shayid.

Dunya seye nahi kaam, na koe shikayet
wohi aik dunya bhen sekta heye, ger wohh chaheye
Yeye tow aik hee shks kee dee gaee,
Beyhis nawazishein hein saree,
Kafee ho chukee hein zaat kee
Seb shemien, medhem, ubb, kutch aiseye
Koe ehsas nahi hota mhesoon, abhi bus,
kabhi!

Tow aye dost, aur hem nawa,
tum yeye izn-e-maseehai, bezm-e-zoq-e-tenhai,
Meri zaat seye izn-e-shanasai,
Zaroor leye lo,
Mager meireye zakhmoon ki gherai,
Meire tanhai,
Meireye dil keye muqaffil shauq sareye,
Meireye, ussi keye diyeye huveye sanateye, aur ruswaee,
Wohee aa ker suljhaeyeye, senwareye jo iss neye heye bigara,
Han, wohee!
Towhee theekh ho ga,
Yeye, meira gaem zeda sa wajood seb.

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aap sab ka buhat shukria..

esp to Dushwari for adding up beauty to this thread.. :bb:

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thanks you, Ahmer.
best,

Dushwari

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bohot khoob Ahmer :k:

nice sharing dushwari :k:

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thnx Sheal :)

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nice stuff from both of u :k:

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thnx :)

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Simply :k:

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wah bohot khuub jiss ne b likha he bohot khuub likha he,,,,,,,,,,,,,