tumhain bakshi hai

SunnyBoy · May 1, 2007, 7:38pm

tumhain bakshi hai dil pay hukmarani or kya daytay

Yehi thi bas hamari raajdhani or kya daytay

sitaroon say kisi ki mang bharna ik fasana hai

Tumharay nam likh dee zindgani or kya daytay

Woh mugh say mangta tha umer ka ik dilnashi hisa

na daytay us ko hum apni jawani or kya daytay

bichartay wakt us ko ik na ik tohfa tou dayna tha

hamaray pass tha ankhon main pani or kya daytay

KinaRa · May 2, 2007, 3:16am

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

nice one :)

deep_ocean · May 2, 2007, 4:23am

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

:k:

aabla_pa · May 2, 2007, 8:08am

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

Nice

babri · May 2, 2007, 9:55am

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

Oye pa jii Great. :k:

SunnyBoy · May 2, 2007, 10:49am

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

thx all of ya

babri · May 2, 2007, 10:51am

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

you most wellcome pa jii. ye hai hi iteni piyaari.

SunnyBoy · May 2, 2007, 10:53am

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

thx again Jigar

babri · May 2, 2007, 11:00am

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

pa jii ab main thankz nahi kahun ga warna app phir well kaho gey aur main phir thankz its ok yaar. poem bot achi hai.

moonmine · May 2, 2007, 2:01pm

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

Gr8!

ASA · May 2, 2007, 2:14pm

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

Yeh us ke Dard ko sehna yeh shair keh laina
Yeh us ke pyar ki bakhshish hain sub hunar meray
Tu meray saath rahey na rahey meray Hamdam
Yeh teri yaad tera ghum hain Humsafar meray

aabla_pa · May 2, 2007, 6:37pm

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

^^ Very Nice

SunnyBoy · May 3, 2007, 12:34pm

Re: tumhain bakshi hai

:k: