Tumhaien wapis bulati hain

IS · February 9, 2006, 8:40pm

**ham apnay aap ko
pathar ana kay khuf say
jitna bazahir pursukoon rehnay ke adat dhal lein
par hijar ke baichain yakh basta hawa say
rakh mien dhalti tamanien b
akhir kapkapti hain
sadaien larhkharhati hien
tumhien malooom to ho ga
kay kachi umer ke chahat
hazaroon saal b dil kay kesi gehray sumandar mein
rahay paband
par
phir b kabi marti nahi
mein nay bohat arsa tumhiein
yadoon, khaiyaloon ayr khawaboon ke nigahoon say kiya ujal
maga jana
mein apnay aap say ab larhtay larhtay thak gia hoon
ayr
akailay pan kay viran saihar mein
jab sham dhalti hay
to muday say thaki hari wafaien
soog mien dhobay howay kuch geet gati hien
tumhien wapis bulati hein **

muslima_1 · February 9, 2006, 9:14pm

Re: Tumhaien wapis bulati hain

[quote=Innocent_Smile]
tumhien malooom to ho ga **
**kay kachi umer ke chahat
hazaroon saal b dil kay kesi gehray sumandar mein
rahay paband **
**par
phir b kabi marti nahi **
**mein nay bohat arsa tumhiein
yadoon, khaiyaloon ayr khawaboon ke nigahoon say kiya ujal
maga jana
mein apnay aap say ab larhtay larhtay thak gia hoon

i dont think i need to giv u a comment u already know
lagta hai aaj aap inhi kaamo par bethe hain

IS · February 9, 2006, 9:42pm

Re: Tumhaien wapis bulati hain

^ thanks Sis
hmmmmmmmm
ab ik month tak koi thread open nahi karoon ga poetry mai
yani k mai nay ik maheenay ka koota pora kar liya hay aaj :D

muslima_1 · February 9, 2006, 9:54pm

Re: Tumhaien wapis bulati hain

matlab tab tak itni achi poetry se mehroom hona pare ga
wese tab tak ye sab tu mujhe yaad ho jayen gi:confused:

IS · February 9, 2006, 10:32pm

Re: Tumhaien wapis bulati hain

^ nahi tab tak aap post karti rahien na :D
achi baat hay agar yaad ho jaian to :D

ASA · February 10, 2006, 3:32am

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very nice… kya baat hai aap ke jigar..

IS · February 10, 2006, 6:02am

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Thanks ASA bahi

muslima_1 · February 11, 2006, 10:25pm

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magar mein kuch dino baad post karna band kardoo gi im not gonna cum on gs no more for abt 1/2months exams hain revise karna hai

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 12, 2006, 2:33am

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niceeee!

system · February 12, 2006, 3:11am

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:(

IS · February 12, 2006, 4:49am

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i c
wish u all the best for the Examz
and aaj mai nay ik aur poem post ke hay jo k again meri bohat fav. ones mai say hay
mai nay socha k janay say pehlay aap k liay ik achi si poem he parhnay k liay post kar doon :D

IS · February 12, 2006, 4:50am

Re: Tumhaien wapis bulati hain

thanks ghazal sis :)

IS · February 12, 2006, 4:52am

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dont b sad :)

muslima_1 · February 12, 2006, 1:32pm

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thanks

IS · February 13, 2006, 4:45am

Re: Tumhaien wapis bulati hain

^ welcome :)