"tumhaarii yaad kii ... "

aadaab, dosto!

ek haaliya Ghazal pesh hai. mulaahizah farmaaiye aur apnii raae se navaaziye.

**Ghazal

tumhaarii yaad kii sham.eN jo ham jalaate rahe
andhere dard ke ghir ghir ke dil meN aate rahe

tire Khayaal se roshan the mere qurb-o-javaar
sitaare raat bhar aaNkhoN meN jagmagaate rahe

shab-e-firaaq bitaane ko kuchh to karnaa thaa
hisaab un kii inaayaat kaa lagaate rahe

shikastah ho hii gayaa sheesha choT khaa khaa kar
Ghazab kiyaa ki jo patthar se dil lagaate rage

hamaare ishq kaa andaaz bhii niraalaa thaa
ki zaKhm khaate rahe, aur muskuraate rahe

safar tamaam dar-e-yaar hii pe aa ke huaa
qadam hazaar sar-e-raah Dagmagaate rahe

Tale na apne usuuloN se ham kabhii, yaaro!
taqaaza.haa-e-Gham-e-dahr aazmaate rahe

kisii ke qurb kii :Waseem: talab thii aisii kuchh
ki ham jahaaN kii har ik shai se duur jaate rahe !!!

Waseem Ahmed**

:k:

wah..waseem sahab..achhi ghazal pesh kii hai aap ne....
daad kubul kijiye...

very nice :)

Beautiful ghazal dost jee :flower1:

thx for sharin..:k: and keep it up :flower1: :slight_smile:

Ghazal post karne ke baad ahsaas huaa ki sher #7 meN :taqaazaa: kaa alif gir rahaa hai. ye misraa yuuN kar diyaa hai: taqaaze jaada-e-hastii ke aazmaate rahe.

Cutee,Pramod,Minerva our HH Jee Ghazal pasand farmaane kaa Bahut Bahut shukriya!

hummm