Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

LP June 2, 2012, 11:47am 1

kabhii to aasmaan se chaand utare jaam ho jaaye
tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam ho jaaye

hamaaraa dil savere kaa sunaharaa jaam ho jaaye
charaagoN kii tarah aankheN jalen jab shaam ho jaaye

ajab haalaat the yuuN dil kaa saudaa ho gayaa aakhir
mohabaat kii havelii jis tarah niilaam ho jaaye

samandar ke safar meN is tarah aawaaz do hamako
havaayeN tez hoN aur kashtiyoN meN shaam ho jaaye

maiN Khud bhii ehatiyaatan us galii se kam guzarataa huuN,
ko_ii maasuum kyoN mere liye badanaam ho jaaye

mujhe maaluum hai us kaa Thikaana phir kahaaN hogaa
pariNdaa aasmaaN chhuune meN jab naaqaam ho jaaye

ujaale apanii yaadoN ke hamaare saath rahane do
na jaane kis galii men zindagii kii shaam ho jaaye

KKF June 2, 2012, 12:11pm 2

Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam

na jaane kis galii meN zindagii kii shaam ho jaaye :)

bahot Khoob...yeh misr'a to zarb-ul-misl hai! :) Khoobsoorat intiKhaab hai...shukran. :)

LP June 2, 2012, 12:17pm 3

Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam

ye tou aapki 'ala zauqi hai

ninja_hattori June 2, 2012, 1:14pm 4

LP ARDU ZABAN SIKHING?

LP June 2, 2012, 1:15pm 5

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poetry section ka kamaal

ninja_hattori June 2, 2012, 1:25pm 6

Main hi sabse pichhe chal raha hun all other mods are doing fabulous job!:k:

Waise nice choice LP

muqawwee123 June 2, 2012, 7:37pm 7

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ajab haalaat the yuuN dil kaa saudaa ho gayaa aakhir
mohabaat kii havelii jis tarah niilaam ho jaaye

Kia ye ksis wadere ne likhi… Muhabbat ki haveli ka neelaam

muqawwee123 June 2, 2012, 7:38pm 8

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Ji KKF ye boht maqbool (ghissi hui) line hai, jo Pakistan main trucks ke peeche likhi hui pai jati hai :)

muqawwee123 June 2, 2012, 7:38pm 9

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Aap ka ilaanj karna padega

KKF June 2, 2012, 7:48pm 10

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bajaa farmaayaa...India meN to 'pedal rickshaw' ke bhii peechhe likhaa dikhtaa hai...vaise, tangoN ke peechhe kabhii kuchh likhaa nahiiN dekhaa! lagtaa hai ghoRaa raazii nahiiN huaa hogaa! :D

devilish_angel June 2, 2012, 7:49pm 11

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Koi masom meray lye kyun badnaam ho jai

devilish_angel June 2, 2012, 7:50pm 12

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Kabhi kisi aur k forumpe bhi a jaya karo

muqawwee123 June 2, 2012, 7:52pm 13

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Ek Ghode ke ooper maine Badal likha hua dekha tha... shayad kale rung ki waja se likha ho, nahin to aksar tange wale ghoRe raftar ke hisaab se Badal to nahin hote

muqawwee123 June 2, 2012, 7:53pm 14

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pehle apne pe to aae

KKF June 2, 2012, 7:56pm 15

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yaa phir uskii subuk raftaarii kii vajah se...uRte baadal haule haule hii hawaa ke dosh pe sawaar apnii manzil kii taraf gaamzan hote bazaahir dikhaaii dete haiN! :D

devilish_angel June 2, 2012, 7:58pm 16

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Lolz CM sahib time to take some action

ninja_hattori June 2, 2012, 8:31pm 17

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CM sahab ko zyada bhadkane ki zaroorat nahi hai

devilish_angel June 2, 2012, 8:42pm 18

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Phr khud I seedhay ho jao

enter10 June 2, 2012, 8:58pm 19

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Nice Sharing.....

LP June 4, 2012, 12:12am 20

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haan ye zara masroof hain kuch imp decisions mai