LP
June 2, 2012, 11:47am
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kabhii to aasmaan se chaand utare jaam ho jaaye
tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam ho jaaye
hamaaraa dil savere kaa sunaharaa jaam ho jaaye
charaagoN kii tarah aankheN jalen jab shaam ho jaaye
ajab haalaat the yuuN dil kaa saudaa ho gayaa aakhir
mohabaat kii havelii jis tarah niilaam ho jaaye
samandar ke safar meN is tarah aawaaz do hamako
havaayeN tez hoN aur kashtiyoN meN shaam ho jaaye
maiN Khud bhii ehatiyaatan us galii se kam guzarataa huuN,
ko_ii maasuum kyoN mere liye badanaam ho jaaye
mujhe maaluum hai us kaa Thikaana phir kahaaN hogaa
pariNdaa aasmaaN chhuune meN jab naaqaam ho jaaye
ujaale apanii yaadoN ke hamaare saath rahane do
na jaane kis galii men zindagii kii shaam ho jaaye
KKF
June 2, 2012, 12:11pm
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na jaane kis galii meN zindagii kii shaam ho jaaye
bahot Khoob…yeh misr’a to zarb-ul-misl hai! Khoobsoorat intiKhaab hai…shukran.
LP
June 2, 2012, 12:17pm
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Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
ye tou aapki 'ala zauqi hai
LP
June 2, 2012, 1:15pm
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Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
poetry section ka kamaal
Main hi sabse pichhe chal raha hun all other mods are doing fabulous job!:k:
Waise nice choice LP
Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
ajab haalaat the yuuN dil kaa saudaa ho gayaa aakhir
mohabaat kii havelii jis tarah niilaam ho jaaye
Kia ye ksis wadere ne likhi… Muhabbat ki haveli ka neelaam
Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
Ji KKF ye boht maqbool (ghissi hui) line hai, jo Pakistan main trucks ke peeche likhi hui pai jati hai
Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
Aap ka ilaanj karna padega
KKF
June 2, 2012, 7:48pm
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Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
bajaa farmaayaa…India meN to ‘pedal rickshaw’ ke bhii peechhe likhaa dikhtaa hai…vaise, tangoN ke peechhe kabhii kuchh likhaa nahiiN dekhaa! lagtaa hai ghoRaa raazii nahiiN huaa hogaa!
Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
Koi masom meray lye kyun badnaam ho jai
Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
Kabhi kisi aur k forumpe bhi a jaya karo
Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
Ek Ghode ke ooper maine Badal likha hua dekha tha… shayad kale rung ki waja se likha ho, nahin to aksar tange wale ghoRe raftar ke hisaab se Badal to nahin hote
Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
pehle apne pe to aae
KKF
June 2, 2012, 7:56pm
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Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
yaa phir uskii subuk raftaarii kii vajah se…uRte baadal haule haule hii hawaa ke dosh pe sawaar apnii manzil kii taraf gaamzan hote bazaahir dikhaaii dete haiN!
Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
pehle apne pe to aae
Lolz CM sahib time to take some action
Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
CM sahab ko zyada bhadkane ki zaroorat nahi hai
Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
Phr khud I seedhay ho jao
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Nice Sharing…
LP
June 4, 2012, 12:12am
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Re: Tumhaare naam kii ik Khuubasuurat shaam
haan ye zara masroof hain kuch imp decisions mai