Tumahary Pathar Dil Kay liya

Dilsay · January 14, 2003, 11:42pm

Jab umeedain ahista ahista khatam hoon
Khawab zara zara tootnay lagain
Dharkanain sansoon ka sath na dain
Neend say bojahal ankhain jab
Taroon ko taknay lagain
Jab lafz zaban ka sath na dain
Jab dil har sooch say bagi hoo
Jab sookoon behi baychani day
Tab ankhain band kar kay
Khud he apnay Dilsay
Kahna jis ko tum nay jagaha na dee
Us ko zameen nay bari bohabat say
Apnee agoosh main sula diya hai

Dilsay

SunnyBoy · January 15, 2003, 12:11am

nice :k:

aadhoorighazal · January 15, 2003, 12:40am

Re: Tumahary Pathar Dil Kay liya

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Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Jab umeedain ahista ahista khatam hoon
Khawab zara zara tootnay lagain
Dharkanain sansoon ka sath na dain
Neend say bojahal ankhain jab
Taroon ko taknay lagain
Jab lafz zaban ka sath na dain
Jab dil har sooch say bagi hoo
Jab sookoon behi baychani day
Tab ankhain band kar kay
Khud he apnay **Dilsay*
Kahna jis ko tum nay jagaha na dee
Us ko zameen nay bari bohabat say
Apnee agoosh main sula diya hai

Dilsay
[/QUOTE]

The poetry is excellent, and very touching.Magar mujhea tu itna samjha rahae thae aap??? phir yeh is darja naumeedi??? buree baat is tarha marnae ki baatain nahin kartae!!!!

Koyal · January 15, 2003, 2:10am

:k: keep it up …

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 15, 2003, 4:14am

bohut khoob:k::k:
keep it up:)

Lamhay · January 15, 2003, 9:53am

bahut khoob aap ki choice ka jawab nahin thanks 4 sharing!

Dilsay · January 15, 2003, 12:00pm

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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
bahut khoob aap ki choice ka jawab nahin thanks 4 sharing!
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this is not a choise this is written by me... Dilsay likha hai na.....

Dilsay · January 15, 2003, 12:03pm

Re: Re: Tumahary Pathar Dil Kay liya

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*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *

The poetry is excellent, and very touching.Magar mujhea tu itna samjha rahae thae aap??? phir yeh is darja naumeedi??? buree baat is tarha marnae ki baatain nahin kartae!!!!
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You are right... magar kabhi kabhi dil kisi kee yaad main asa hoo jata hai ka kuch samajah nahi ata jaab mainay ya likha tha us waqat raat bohat hoo gayee thee... main na umeed nahi hoon.... baas dil kuch sath nahi day raha tha kaal raat.... :)

Amal · January 15, 2003, 2:29pm

Re: Tumahary Pathar Dil Kay liya

very nice and touching:k:…thanx for sharing.

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 15, 2003, 3:56pm

Nice,keep it up &Thanks for sharing :)

guybrush · January 15, 2003, 4:09pm

bahut khoob

chand_chehra · January 15, 2003, 6:04pm

:k:

system · January 15, 2003, 6:04pm

beautiful, keep it up.. :k:

_MuNiYa · January 15, 2003, 8:38pm

very good!

nikii · January 15, 2003, 10:58pm

very nice dilsey
keep it up :k:

XkanwalX · January 15, 2003, 11:15pm

bohat acchi ghazal hia.. really like it..

Dilsay · January 16, 2003, 4:54pm

Thanks every one....

Azad · January 16, 2003, 8:55pm

Re: Tumahary Pathar Dil Kay liya

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Us ko zameen nay bari bohabat say
Apnee agoosh main sula diya hai
**Dilsay*
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Chal jhotay hum dakh aay hain ... wahan to sirf kaDa hay or woh bhi panni say bhara howa .... baRay aay aghosh main sonay walay ..khair
dil kho khush rakhnay ko yeh behooda khayal acha hay