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Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · February 17, 2004, 7:28pm

** Yeh zindagi aisi na thi pehlay hamari Na jaanay tum kab ayaay kab ham ko jagaya tum nay Na jaanay kab dil baygaana howa kab wo tumhaara howa Aik kami thi jo poori howi Ik ehsaas saa jo paida howa Ik junoon sa paida howa Ik tarap si baydaar howi Badal kar rakh dia sab kuch tum nay Abb dil apna raha na dil waala

Hamain;
Kitna pehchannay lagay ho tum
Koi apna aap bhi nahi jaanta itna
Parh laitay ho band honton ko tum
Chupti nahi abb khushk hansi tum say
Daik kar Kar laitay ho namm aankhon ko tum

Jaga daiti hamain aksar yaad tumhaari
Itna shiddat say yaad kartay ho tum
Bhulaaya nai kisi pal tum nay ham ko
Bin hamaray Bitaaya nai koi pal tum nay
Ik jaan do qalib banaya tum nay
Iss jisam ko apna banaya tum nay

Bohat guroor hay ham ko ham par
Wajah bhi to aisi rakhtay hain ham
Q na ho guroor ham ko aakhir
Tum sa jo nahi daikha kabhi ham nay

**

Dedicated to …
By …Ata

nikii · February 17, 2004, 9:16pm

Re: --Tum...

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by ?: *

*

Itna shiddat say yaad kartay ho tum
Bhulaaya nai kisi pal tum nay ham ko
Bin hamaray Bitaaya nai koi pal tum nay
Ik jaan do qalib banaya tum nay
Iss jisam ko apna banaya tum nay

Bohat guroor hay ham ko ham par
Wajah bhi to aisi rakhtay hain ham
Q na ho guroor ham ko aakhir
Tum sa jo nahi daikha kabhi ham nay

**

Dedicated to ...
By ...Ata

[/QUOTE]

i love this part bhut achaa likha ha :)

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · February 17, 2004, 10:39pm

Re: Re: --Tum...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by nikii: *

i love this part bhut achaa likha ha :)
[/QUOTE]
Shukria Shimz ...aur baqi ka part ? hehe

Swera · February 17, 2004, 11:01pm

Bohat khoob:)

Azad · February 18, 2004, 5:49am

humm

rabika · February 18, 2004, 4:19pm

:-)
acha likha hey bhaiyah:-)

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 18, 2004, 4:55pm

oh its nice:k:

Amarbail · February 18, 2004, 5:16pm

Wonderful effort …:k: and yes, great dedication made …
Thanks for sharing !

Jaan_Lewaa · February 18, 2004, 6:30pm

bhut achay:k:

cuteepie · February 19, 2004, 12:31am

very nice k:

Lamhay · February 19, 2004, 1:04pm

Q na ho guroor ham ko aakhir
Tum sa jo nahi daikha kabhi ham nay

wah ata bhai zabardast !!

Mahnoor · February 19, 2004, 3:46pm

wow it is beautiful
** Badal kar rakh dia sab kuch tum nay Abb dil apna raha na dil waala **
words of magic you have used to express your feelings, someone very lucky :k:

Dania · February 19, 2004, 6:19pm

beautiful :k:

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · February 19, 2004, 8:00pm

mujhay qasam say bohat sharam aarai hay abb my face was all red and hot…and I really am blushed …lol pata nai q indeed it was nothing but aap sab ki mohabbat aur piaar hay jo time nikaal kar parhtay bhi kuch aur reply bhi kartay hain…really honoring…
sab ka shukariaa
Mahnoor, lucky wo nai balkay main hoon and no magic , I am not jadugar
**
Swera
Rabika
Ghazal
Cute-pie
Azad
Jaan lewa**
sab ka bohat bohat shukriaa

Arif Nawaz, thanks you sir,yep its dedicated to whom knows well byself!

** Lamhay ** aap ka husn-e-nazar hay sachi warna hamain shairi kahan aati hehe thank you dear

_Passionate · February 19, 2004, 10:58pm

arey wah wah

it was lovely reading it bhai…great job! :k:

AQ · February 20, 2004, 5:25am

great poetry ATA :-)

Badal kar rakh dia sab kuch tum nay
Abb dil apna raha na dil waala
^
:)

Dania · February 20, 2004, 5:42am

Mahnoor · February 20, 2004, 12:16pm

Welcum Welcum, aabh yeh tu wohei bata sakta hain kai aap jadugar hain ka nahi

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · February 24, 2004, 7:12pm

lol how in the world I forgot your name lol sorry and thanks

Thanks kochiii

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · February 24, 2004, 7:13pm

I know great people great poultry (farm)

haan to pooch lain khud hi