tum us k zikar pe keoN doob jaatey ho khayalooN maiN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal June 30, 2005, 3:53am 1

bataa’oo dil ki baazi maiN bhla kia baat gahri thei

kaha yuuN tu sabhi kuch theek tha maa’t gahri thei

suno baarish! kabhi khud se bhi koi bhar k dekha hai?
jawab aa’ya in aankhooN ki magar barsaat gahri thei

suno peetam ne holay se kaha tha kia bataa’oo gaye
jawab aa’ya kaha tu tha magar wo baat gahri thei

dee’aa dil ka samnadar is ne, tum ne kia kee’aa us ko
hamiN bus doob jana tha k wo soo’ghaat gahri thei

wafa ka dasht kesa tha bataa’o tum pe kia beeti
bhatak jana he tha hum ko,wahaN pe raat gahri thei

tum us k zikar pe keoN doob jaatey ho khayalooN maiN
rafaqat aur adawat us k saath apni gahri thei

nazar aa’ya tumhiN us ajnabi maiN kia bataa’oo gaye
suno qatil nighahooN ki wo zalim ghaat gahri thei

Shab-e-Hijar June 30, 2005, 4:39am 2

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wafa ka dasht kesa tha bataa'o tum pe kia beeti bhatak jana he tha hum ko,wahaN pe raat gahri thei

tum us k zikar pe keoN doob jaatey ho khayalooN maiN
rafaqat aur adawat us k saath apni gahri thei

bohat khoob :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR June 30, 2005, 9:23am 3

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Beautiful ghazal!

Maheen2002 June 30, 2005, 1:44pm 4

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nice :-)

taaraa June 30, 2005, 3:44pm 5

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very nice

Zalim_Wadera June 30, 2005, 4:01pm 6

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Nice

but we are totally different with indians...

ullujii June 30, 2005, 4:24pm 7

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nazar aa'ya tumhiN us ajnabi maiN kia bataa'oo gaye
suno qatil nighahooN ki wo zalim ghaat gahri thei

wah. Zalim logon ke zalim poems. very nice

maddi June 30, 2005, 4:53pm 8

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such a lovely gazal thankx 4 sharing koyal

Koyal July 2, 2005, 4:19am 9

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thanks chand g

system July 2, 2005, 11:58am 10

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nice :k:

hina_here July 2, 2005, 12:27pm 11

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too gud Koyal ji thanx for sharing with us :)

ghazal_kisi_ke July 2, 2005, 11:22pm 12

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i was reading this ghazal yesterday ..thanx for sharing =))

K_Khan July 11, 2005, 11:52pm 13

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very nice koko…

SunnyBoy July 12, 2005, 12:52am 14

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nice

Non muslims dont go to heaven?

safeena July 12, 2005, 1:57am 15

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dee'aa dil ka samnadar jis ne, tum ne kia kee'aa us ko
hamiN bus doob jana tha k wo soo'ghaat gahri thei

very beautiful

Koyal July 12, 2005, 3:41am 16

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thanks heartu..

----> TimePass

Koyal July 12, 2005, 3:48am 17

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thanks safeena and sunny…wesay aj kla ap kahan paa’ey jatey:D

Koyal July 12, 2005, 3:51am 18

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thanks logo kesay ho aur kahaN ho ..

Koyal July 12, 2005, 3:56am 19

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Really
kahan pe gazal hamin b batao wo site:)

Koyal July 12, 2005, 3:58am 20

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thanks maheeno:)