JonyBr
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Tum tu chalay gaye, apni yadain tu lay jao
bewaafai se bhari, wo batain tu lay jao
chalo maan letay hain, tum kisi ki amanat thi
par mujh per nichawar, apni chahatain tu lay jao
teray janay ke bad bhi, bara pursukon rahta hon
kamaz kam apnay sath, meri rahatain tu lay jao
kitna badnaseeb hon, tujh se nafrat bhi nai kerpata
meray senay mein bhari, ye muhabatain tu lay jao
per tera khayal aaj bhi, rula sa deta hai mujhay
meri sochoon mein bhari, ye shidatain tu lay jao
mein aaj bhi zinda, kis ki khatir, ji raha hoon?
Atif, meri sansoon ki akay, taqatain tu lay jao
17th June 1997 10:55 AM

Re: Tum tu chalay gaye…
Waooo!!!:k:
ap na llikhe hai:p
beautiful:k:
keep it up and thanx for sharing:flower1:
kitna badnaseeb hon, tujh se nafrat bhi nai kerpata
meray senay mein bhari, ye muhabatain tu lay jao
per tera khayal aaj bhi, rula sa deta hai mujhay
meri sochoon mein bhari, ye shidatain tu lay jao
mein aaj bhi zinda, kis ki khatir, ji raha hoon?
Atif, meri sansoon ki akay, taqatain tu lay jao
buhet khoob :k:
thanx for sharing 
Wah! aik aik shair lajawab :k: Keep it up! 
monasha
6
Oye hoye Ati..Kiya baat hai 
excellent choice of words :k:k:
keep it up
Nice Atif :k:
97 mein kia hua tha tumhare saath?
JonyBr
11
Thanx everyone.
Capri : Purani batain ko mat khuraido 

Acha to mein kuraid raha hoon? 
Pepsi episode ke baad kuch sathiya gaye ho bhayee;)