Tum ney tootey huwey pattoN ko kabhi deikha hey!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Daawat-e-tamaasha

Tum ney tootey huwey pattoN ko kabhi deikha hey!
darakht ke haath sey girey huwey sookhey pattey!
khaak-aalooda, sitam-raseeda, faryaad-kanaaN
hawa ke rehm-o-karm par ke ab ley jaaey jahaaN
jin ki zaat meiN pasti hey, qismat meiN fanaa
bein kartey huwey, tarraptey huwey, sehmey huwey
kisi raah-geer ke qadmoN ki dhamak suntey huwey
jin ki aaNkhoN meiN be’kasi ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
jin ke bas meiN be’basi ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
shaoq-e-tamaasha hey to kisi roz mujhey milney aao
tum ney tootey huwey pattoN ko nahi deikha agar!!!

Tum ney tthehrey huwey paani ko kabhi deikha hey!
kisi sookhti hui jheel meiN be’jaan sa tthehra paani!
jis ke qatroN meiN haraarat ki koi ramaq bhi nahi
jis ki lehroN meiN zindagi ki koi chamak bhi nahi
jheel ki godd meiN simat’ta huwa gadla paani,
wohi camakta huwa, shafaaf sa pyaara paani
jo kabhi mashkeeza-e-abr ke laboN sey chalka tha
aaj haqaarat sey taktey heiN usey guzarney waaley
shaoq-e-tamaasha hey to kisi roz mujhey milney aao
tum ney ttherey huwey paani ko nahi deikha agar!!!

Tum ney uljhey huwey dhaagoN ko kabhi deikha hey!
apney hi aap meiN uljhey huwey kacchey dhaagey!
jo apney aap meiN hi reh gaey hoN gunjal ban kar
apney wajood ki gehraaiyoN meiN ik uljhan ban kar
tarhaN tarhaN sey uljhey, jagaa jagaa sey kharaab
jo agar chaaheiN bhi ke saNwaar leiN muqaddar apna
to apni hi zaat ka sira dhoondh dhoondh ke thak jaaeiN
wohi rangeen sey dhaagey jo kabhi they misl-e-dhanak
aaj apney aap meiN yuN uljhey heiN ke sulajhtey hi nahi
shaoq-e-tamaasha hey to kisi roz mujhey milney aao
tum ney uljhey huwey dhaagoN ko nahi deikha agar!!!

By: Amal

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Re: Tum ney tootey huwey pattoN ko kabhi deikha hey!

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Originally posted by Amal: *
**Daawat-e-tamaasha*

Tum ney uljhey huwey dhaagoN ko kabhi deikha hey!
apney hi aap meiN uljhey huwey kacchey dhaagey!
jo apney aap meiN hi reh gaey hoN gunjal ban kar
apney wajood ki gehraaiyoN meiN ik uljhan ban kar

tarhaN tarhaN sey uljhey, jagaa jagaa sey kharaab
jo agar chaaheiN bhi ke saNwaar leiN muqaddar apna
to apni hi zaat ka sira dhoondh dhoondh ke thak jaaeiN
wohi rangeen sey dhaagey jo kabhi they misl-e-dhanak
aaj apney aap meiN yuN uljhey heiN ke sulajhtey hi nahi
shaoq-e-tamaasha hey to kisi roz mujhey milney aao
tum ney uljhey huwey dhaagoN ko nahi deikha agar!!!

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*Aymal * sari nazam he Beautiful but this part is really,,,,not word 4 :(

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wowww amal ji hamesha ki tarah zaberdast :k:
thxs 4 sharing :slight_smile:

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beautifull :k:

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Very nice....

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Buhat Khoob :k:

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wow!!!
excellent work:k::k::k:
thanks for sharing:flower1:
ap mujhe pal do pal ke shaer nahi lagtae:)

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beautiful amal :slight_smile: :k:

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wonderful as alwayzz…:k:..thanx a bunch for sharing..:flower1:

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Bohat Khoob Amal... :)

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Amal its really really gr8 ur poetry is no doubt superb!

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:k:

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NikamiJi, CC, nikii, Dilsay, SunnyBoy, ghazal
kisi ke, &Passionate, Aceones!, WiseGuy, Lamhay
aur Arif, aap sab dostoN ka be’had shukriya
jo aap logoN ney meri nazm ko saraa’ha:) … I am
extremely thankful to all of you:flower1:

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Marvellous, keep it up & Thanks for sharing Amal Ji:)

PS: Jis nay Tuutay huwey pattoN ,Thehray huwey paani aur Uljhay huwey dhaagoN ko dekhaa hay kyaa wuh milnay na AaiN :~)

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:k: very nice :k:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

Jis nay Tuutay huwey pattoN ,Thehray huwey paani aur Uljhay huwey dhaagoN ko dekhaa hay kyaa wuh milnay na AaiN :~)
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Un ke leeye naya 'dawaat-naama' likhna parrey ga :)

Thanx guybrush:)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

Un ke leeye naya 'dawaat-naama' likhna parrey ga :)

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to phir jaldi sey likh bhi dijiye na :)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
ap mujhe pal do pal ke shaer nahi lagtae:)
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Aap shaer ki baat kar rahi ho, mera to khayaal hey ke insaan khud bhi pal do
pal ka hi hota hey. Ba'qaol shaer: "samaan so baras ka hey pal ki khabar nahi"

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Re: Tum ney tootey huwey pattoN ko kabhi deikha hey!

awwwwwww i’m speechless na …uff mar dala :teary3:

Amal jee aap ka qalam rooz ba-rooz qaatil hota jata he

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Beautiful :k::K: keep it up… :slight_smile: